Good story. Even if there is another chapter *which I do hope for*, I can't see this becoming a romantic Twixie fic. It seems alot more like a friendship Twixie fic, at least to me. You portray a very interesting Trixie, makes me wish that you were adding alot more into this world. Makes me wonder why Celestia just dumped her and never checked back on the filly she said would become her pupil. Did Trixie really just slip through the cracks in celestia's memory? Can't see Trixie NOT being pissed about that. A more random and pointless question I have to ask is, just where Trixie hit Twilight with that feather spell that is illegal? I felt this to be a very good mix between dark/comedy/and friendship, which doesn't have a tag. Trixie got a taste of what it would be like to be in a friendship *well, ok, it was kinda like having either a roommate or a marefriend, but with Twilight just wanting to GTFO and Trixie kidnapping, ya gotta take it with a grain of salt*. Well done, and I will have to look through at what else you have made...at least if I ever get a notice on them updating.
ONE MORE CHAPTER!
ONE MORE CHAPTER!
ONE MORE CHAPTER!
...Please
*Sees in news feed Blood Boil was updated and it wasn't.
WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME SO?!
That or fimfic screwed up, who knows?
Good story. Even if there is another chapter *which I do hope for*, I can't see this becoming a romantic Twixie fic. It seems alot more like a friendship Twixie fic, at least to me.
You portray a very interesting Trixie, makes me wish that you were adding alot more into this world. Makes me wonder why Celestia just dumped her and never checked back on the filly she said would become her pupil. Did Trixie really just slip through the cracks in celestia's memory? Can't see Trixie NOT being pissed about that.
A more random and pointless question I have to ask is, just where Trixie hit Twilight with that feather spell that is illegal?
I felt this to be a very good mix between dark/comedy/and friendship, which doesn't have a tag. Trixie got a taste of what it would be like to be in a friendship *well, ok, it was kinda like having either a roommate or a marefriend, but with Twilight just wanting to GTFO and Trixie kidnapping, ya gotta take it with a grain of salt*.
Well done, and I will have to look through at what else you have made...at least if I ever get a notice on them updating.