Needs a bit more description during Trixie's speech, to help drive in the fact she's a bit insane. Like during her speech she slams her hoof on the table, laughs angrily, stuff like that. All in all it seems like a good story.
Btw, this has a romance tag so...is this going to be a Twixie fic? Cause if it is I would love you for long time !
Gotta be honest: the last line of chapter 1 and the entirety of chapter 2 were a tremendous disappointment. There is so much interaction between Trixie and Twilight and so little between Trixie and Spike that every scrap of the latter equals the pleasure of a free dinner and the premier of a new Tolkien or Bond movie. Those two or three paragraphs in the middle of chapter one were the best part of the entire story for me, even though it clearly won't lead to a TrixiexSpike ship.
Well, dear, can't please ALL the ponies. Is...is Trixie and Spike even a thing? Is that a thing? I'm sorry darlin, this is a Trixie/Twilight Fic. Spike just happens to have a roll.
Wow. Super curious now. Gonna fave~ Don't disappoint me now, k?
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Darling, I wouldn't DREAM of disappointing a fan!
Needs a bit more description during Trixie's speech, to help drive in the fact she's a bit insane. Like during her speech she slams her hoof on the table, laughs angrily, stuff like that. All in all it seems like a good story.
Btw, this has a romance tag so...is this going to be a Twixie fic? Cause if it is I would love you for long time !
Gotta be honest: the last line of chapter 1 and the entirety of chapter 2 were a tremendous disappointment. There is so much interaction between Trixie and Twilight and so little between Trixie and Spike that every scrap of the latter equals the pleasure of a free dinner and the premier of a new Tolkien or Bond movie. Those two or three paragraphs in the middle of chapter one were the best part of the entire story for me, even though it clearly won't lead to a TrixiexSpike ship.
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This?! A Twixie story? Hohohoh, Darling.
Ofcourseitis. ;)
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Well, dear, can't please ALL the ponies.
Is...is Trixie and Spike even a thing? Is that a thing? I'm sorry darlin, this is a Trixie/Twilight Fic. Spike just happens to have a roll.