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Haha, I had this exact same idea earlier, but wasn't really going to write it.
I know that feel!
Once you try bacon, you're a carnivore. Period.
I like the story. I'm entertained, at very least. It is certainly the domain of Thalia
, not of Calliope
, but that is the nature of all bacon-themed stories.
I had an the same idea but with fluttershy...
She regularly goes to gryphon vendors and gets cheeseburgers "for her gryphon friend"
Never did write it...
ha!!! funny
Ya know, there is a similar fic with the exact same title on here.
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Thank you
.
2737334 Really? Where?
BUCK YEAH BACON MOTHERBUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously though, very funny stuff!!
As a side note apparently 5 people dont like bacon, dafuq?
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To answer the question directed to Gyvon it has the same title only with an apostrophe in it and is written by wille179.
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Well ... shit.
Ok I'll just read that fic and try to make mine different.
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Yours is already quite a bit different. Different impetus for the compulsion to eat and I think a different direction as to the results.
I found this story to be fu-, no, HILARIOUS!
At the same time, I couldn’t help noticing that the theme is quite similar to But The Kitchen Sink. I dunno, might be me, but this is good. Please continue.
You take that back Roxxy. Canadian bacon and English back bacon are scrumptious.
The first time I saw that picture, I was like "Gee, I hope there's a fic somewhere out there about this."
You're awesome
Mmmmmmmmm, bacon.
STAY AWAY FROM MY BACON OR I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Not gonna lie... This could use work. Some grammar and length issues are rampant in this.
But the idea? Clever. Very clever.
No fave from me, but you do get an Upvote.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2742163 Thanks for the like and you're right.
Grammar was never my strong point and i need to work on making the chapters longer.
I appreciate your comment.
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There's a dozen and more groups on this site who can help you. Go introduce yourself and ask for help.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Hilarious and curious on how this'll turn out for twi xP
...Epic Meal Time...
I can actually see something good here.
Unfortunately, the grammar is way off, and to be honest, the breaks are often jarring.
This section above is a prime example of what's wrong with your story. No full stops, no captal letters, and a whole host of misspelt words. either imove your writing, or get an editor.
The first chapter, however, was actually pretty good. Do more of that.
could use some editing but not bad
:D
Twilight should just visit the Griffin kingdom and buy meat there to satisfy her cravings. I'm sure she could get away with it as a diplomatic mission.
2738252 Sparkle sparkle sparkle MuthuBaconFuckuh!!!!
Twilight's Secret*
I found this fanfic in video form:
Solution?
Fly to Gryphonia for a quick meal before buying a couple slabs of the delicious goodness.
Imagine it Twilight ... a Whole Freezer full of the bacony food of the meat eating gods...
I got a fever and the only cure for that fever Is more bacon !!!!
Bacon is a hell of a drug lol.
OH COME ON!
THIS IS A RIP OFF OM MY STORY! My story is called Twilight's Secret, and it also involves her eating meat
! I was here first!
*Takes calming breath*
At least your story has a different cause for her cravings
... and you are taking it in a separate direction... but still...
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anon 490834
At least, could you proof read your story more? I don't want to be associated with something that looks like you have no pride in your work.
2750877 Sorry about that, I changed the title to prevent further confusion. I had no idea your story even existed.
I'll be reading your fic and I'll try to make mine different. Have a nice day.
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Thank you.
We all know that sweet sweet bacon is a gateway meat.
There are former vegetarians that went back to eating meat after trying bacon again. There are blogs written on how difficult it is to resist. There are support groups for this....
And suddenly I want a BLT for some reason...
There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in this story.
"Stake" should be steak.
After quotations, you don't need to capitalize. You also need a comma.
Incorrect:
"Howdy Twi, you sure are early today"She said.
Correct:
"Howdy Twi, you sure are early today," she said.
"Oh, Why don't i help." said Twilight . You should capitalize I. There are numerous other places where you do this.
If you like, I can edit the story for you.
forien exchange -> foreign exchange
Incorrect:
not that crappy Canadian bacon like your used to twi."
Correct:
not that crappy Canadian bacon like you're used to, Twi."
Overall, a pretty funny story so far. I'd be willing to favorite it if you cleaned it up a bit. Again, I can help
2753436
Yeah, I guess I could use an editor,
But how does it work, I'm kind of new at this.
2753933 Well, normally when I edit stories, I just create a Google doc and then PM the author with it. I can do that, if you like.
2753933 Go to here for editors or here for proofreaders.
It's sort of a cute story, though I'd guess most people looking at a pig probably wouldn't think of meat.
Maybe I'm just weird, but to me it doesn't say "meat" until it's dead and the skin's off, and it doesn't hit my appetite until it's cooking.
I do envy human-Twilight her high school cafeteria. When I was in high school, the only meat products were gray, steamed, ground-meat patties. They always looked like something that had died of a horrific skin disease. Steak or bacon? Not likely.
2753933 When is the next chapter coming out?