A pegasister ends up in Equestria. One catch. Her parents came with her.
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Phantom Wolf
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I DEMAND MOAR!
in bed*
Other than that, good job keep up the good work.
You have intrigued me
let's see where you go with this tentative fav
I saw this, clicked read later, and went back to the Scrubs episode I was watching. After several minutes, I realized that I couldn't focus and just had to know.
Well, at least it's better than that time I decided Lines and Webs was good after school reading. Much like that time, I don't regret a single minute of it. Please continue, good sir.
"Pinkie?"
"Yes CDR?"
"Table please."
"Here you go."
"Thanks."
*uses table to bash through groups of people blocking the path to the fic*
Well, this is an interesting take. Faved and liked.
Quick but funny, MOAR!
moving a little fast for my taste but still amazing work.
Moving a bit too fast, and theiir reacions were too light. But still good.
'minuet' -> minute
'weigh' ->weight
'tv' -> TV
'simple' -> simply
It's Sombra! He's working from the shadows! (Normally I would have accused Discord, but I felt like letting King Sombra be the one accused of bringing humans into Equestria for once.)
This is kind-of interesting so far.
Oh, I love them so! Glad to see a character with such refined taste, even in a disoriented state of mind.
Here are the classics, you're welcome.
... Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Plotwise. Personally, I would be more horrified and confused to wake up just to find myself as a horse kinda out of nowhere. (Or dragon, for that matter, despite what my avatar might suggest.) But hey, it's comedy, so I would give it a pass.
Skipped the how. Skipped the existential angst. Skipped the long drawn-out stumbling with hooves. Skipped mourning hand loss. Skipped stumbling around the Everfree forest fighting monsters. Skipped a huge injury and hospital stay in Ponyville. Skipped endlessly pondering reality vs fiction. Very show-cannon - no vulgarity, no "I'm a real physical pony with fur, nudity, and vulgar bits", no bathroom quandry.
Just got right down to it. Quick, to-the-point, efficient. Good solid idea with the 'rents involved.
LOVE IT!
Now how do I follow the *story...* I followed someone else, but it didn't alert me when they had new chapters out. I'm following YOU but I don't see a button to follow the story... :P
*follows you and hopes for the best...*
This is good. The HiE story has been done a lot and it's nice to see one with the person who wanted to be there having one potential problem. And the fact that Laura has a little more knowledge of Equestria than her parents will make for some comic scenes
Join the club. I've got a similar work.
We need more stories where a brony has their parents come along for the ride.
Anna reminds me of my mother... I hate my mother.
Will wait and see.
Good concept, bad grammar.
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I agree with the last line. This WILL be fun.
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I do love it
Hmmmmm...Not everyday I see a cliched fimfic storyline (Fan in Equestria) given a genuinely original twist (In my knowledge at least). Still, I expect an explenation beyond a simple wish. This story in all honesty sounds like a comedy plotline but I see potential in this story and will keep an eye on it.
Hmm.... short, concise and to the point. This idea intrigues me very much.
I suggest finding a pre-reader/editor though. There were plenty mistakes that someone else who's familiar with correct grammar would've caught easily. The dialogue is a bit choppy and descriptions are rather vague, but it's nothing that plenty of practice can't fix.
Gonna favorite and hit 'dat like button for now. This is something that I haven't seen done before in an HiE, and I like it a lot.
2166180 Clicking the favorite button (the little star next to the like/dislike bar) alerts you when there are new updates. Hitting the follow button alerts you when an author has either posted a new fic or a new blog post. Hope this helps.
Her parents came with her?
Brilliant.
You area genusus!
MOAR
I like it! Another!
But seriously, I like it. There are way to many HiE stories but this one is just a little bit different.
MOAT!!!!
The mom.
I think that there is a secret meeting moms attend to compare notes on how to be bossy and ill-tempered. I'm pretty sure mine was in charge of it. That being said, it reminds me of home. I eagerly await the next chapter.
if you ever go to ponyvilla somehow the first do is to visit Twilight
I really don't like the "Brony wishes self into Equestria through IMAGINATION", but this is an interesting way to throw a wrench in the wish fulfillment works. Conflict that really is kind of ignored about these stories is what happens to your family? What happens to those you left behind? Cleans up a little bit of the problems with the story genre,, yet opens up a new passageway. The clear solution here is ANGST. ALL OF IT. MAKE THEM CRY FOR THE FACT THAT THEY WILL NEVER SEE THE PEOPLE THEY LOVE AGAIN! CRY!
But seriously, I would like to see this go there, and even if they dont, it seems like it'll be fun either way
Oh, come on! No drama, no problems with the parents, and they easily follow their child's lead! There is no way that that kind of idea is realistic. But at least it is simple writing and doesn't entail a bunch of nonsensical emotional bullshit!
I look forward to seeing more of your work, carry on, and good luck.
ISA
An interesting concept, to be sure, but your characters don't act like people...
You've just woken up to find your entire family have been turned into ponies and transported to an alternate reality... are you REALLY dense enough to brush off what's right in front of your faces?
Most likely it's a dream, but what does it matter regardless? You might as well get your bearings.
Also, the parents' regard for their daughter's fandom is really douchy, and the daughter's defense of MLP sounds more like what someone with no insight into the brony fandom THINKS a brony might say defensively. It all comes off as stilted, and I don't get any impression of their personalities beyond, "daughter is pegasister: parents disapprove."
Thing is, there needs to be more to these characters than their positions on a single issue. Elsewise, the upcoming story is going to be grating, annoying and very boring. You can't put bland characters in and expect the canon ponies' personalities to do all the work in generating hi-jinks that entertain the reader.
Not quite what it said in the contract, did it?
Or have they failed to read the fine print?
Regardless, this shall prove to be a most curious outcome.
Continue. We shall be watching on most eagerly.
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Moat!? What moat? I don't see a moat anywhere.
Interesting story. Can't wait to see more.
4094003 Typo I meanr Moar not Moat
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I know. I just couldn't help myself.
More plz
7037355 I think it's dead...
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this makes me sad that it was shot down before taking flight