Flash back
As Twilight flew back to the library she remembered the first time she had the succulent delicious treat that was bacon.
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She went into the school cafeteria for breakfast after having slept in the library and taken a shower in the school locker room she mentally kicked herself for not bringing any bits with her as she could have rented a hotel room if she had sold the gold in exchange for American money.
She took a seat next to rainbow dash and Fluter- I mean Roxxy and Faith She was still getting used to the fact that she was now friends with her pony friends human duplicates. It was also a little weird Lying to them and convincing them she was a foreign exchange student from Canada. She had gone through the line and picked up some toast and some Eggs not really knowing what the rest of it was.
"Whoa hold up", Rainb- Roxxy said to her. "How could you not have bacon with eggs?"
"Bacon?" Twilight asked
"Yeah Good old American bacon not that crappy Canadian bacon like you're used to, Twi."
"Um"
"Here Try some" Roxxy said as she shoved a strip of what looked to be sunset shimmers hair into her mouth.
"Rothy i mont..." she said with her mouth full before her taste buds registered the glory they had come in contact with.
Her mouth exploded with flavor as her irises opened wide as if they too wanted to taste all of the strips of joy that entered twilight mouth.She hadn't read all that much on human mythology but if their was a heaven she was in it.She looked again at roxxy as a giant smile spread across her face she swallowed and said to herself.
"Where have you been all my life?"
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Haha, I had this exact same idea earlier, but wasn't really going to write it.
I had an the same idea but with fluttershy...
She regularly goes to gryphon vendors and gets cheeseburgers "for her gryphon friend"
Never did write it...
ha!!! funny
Ya know, there is a similar fic with the exact same title on here.
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Thank you
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2737334 Really? Where?
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To answer the question directed to Gyvon it has the same title only with an apostrophe in it and is written by wille179.
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Well ... shit.
Ok I'll just read that fic and try to make mine different.
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Yours is already quite a bit different. Different impetus for the compulsion to eat and I think a different direction as to the results.
You take that back Roxxy. Canadian bacon and English back bacon are scrumptious.
The first time I saw that picture, I was like "Gee, I hope there's a fic somewhere out there about this."
You're awesome
Mmmmmmmmm, bacon.
STAY AWAY FROM MY BACON OR I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Not gonna lie... This could use work. Some grammar and length issues are rampant in this.
But the idea? Clever. Very clever.
No fave from me, but you do get an Upvote.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2742163 Thanks for the like and you're right.
Grammar was never my strong point and i need to work on making the chapters longer.
I appreciate your comment.
2742245
There's a dozen and more groups on this site who can help you. Go introduce yourself and ask for help.
~Skeeter The Lurker
...Epic Meal Time...
I can actually see something good here.
Unfortunately, the grammar is way off, and to be honest, the breaks are often jarring.
This section above is a prime example of what's wrong with your story. No full stops, no captal letters, and a whole host of misspelt words. either imove your writing, or get an editor.
The first chapter, however, was actually pretty good. Do more of that.
Twilight should just visit the Griffin kingdom and buy meat there to satisfy her cravings. I'm sure she could get away with it as a diplomatic mission.
Twilight's Secret*
I found this fanfic in video form:
Solution?
Fly to Gryphonia for a quick meal before buying a couple slabs of the delicious goodness.
Imagine it Twilight ... a Whole Freezer full of the bacony food of the meat eating gods...
Bacon is a hell of a drug lol.
OH COME ON!
THIS IS A RIP OFF OM MY STORY! My story is called Twilight's Secret, and it also involves her eating meat
! I was here first!
*Takes calming breath*
At least your story has a different cause for her cravings
... and you are taking it in a separate direction... but still...
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anon 490834
At least, could you proof read your story more? I don't want to be associated with something that looks like you have no pride in your work.
2750877 Sorry about that, I changed the title to prevent further confusion. I had no idea your story even existed.
I'll be reading your fic and I'll try to make mine different. Have a nice day.
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Thank you.
We all know that sweet sweet bacon is a gateway meat.
There are former vegetarians that went back to eating meat after trying bacon again. There are blogs written on how difficult it is to resist. There are support groups for this....
And suddenly I want a BLT for some reason...
forien exchange -> foreign exchange
Incorrect:
not that crappy Canadian bacon like your used to twi."
Correct:
not that crappy Canadian bacon like you're used to, Twi."
Overall, a pretty funny story so far. I'd be willing to favorite it if you cleaned it up a bit. Again, I can help
2753933 Well, normally when I edit stories, I just create a Google doc and then PM the author with it. I can do that, if you like.
2753933 When is the next chapter coming out?