When Rarity informs Twilight about Pinkie's purchase of a unicorn, Twilight slightly overreacts at the news. She rushes to Sugar Cube Corner in order to stop Pinkie. Why does Twilight always act like this during these situations? Why is nopony else worried? What could Pinkie Pie possibly do with a unicorn?
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And here I was thinking she paid for a prostitute.
You Magnificent bastard, I read your fanfic!
A love corn? Kinda corny sounding is it? *crickets*
Guess I'm funny like Rarity.
Made me lol.
Have a 'stache.
well then....
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Another good one. Onto the review
Positive: A well written story the character are acting like they should nothing to far off from the norm. The subtile nod to cupcakes was pretty clever and I really did not see the unicorn joke coming
Negative: Using a lesser known fan named background character for pinkie's colt-friend was a bit of an odd choice but that is just a nit pick.
Overall a good fanfic and I want to see more of these short stories from you.
Question: Semantic Point, but does this take place before or after the previous story or not.
2174590 Nice to see you again! This story is completely separate from my previous story, both are totally unrelated. I chose Pokey Pierce for this fic because he's the one of the few unicorn stallions in the show. Plus, he's commonly shipped with Pinkie anyway.
Aside from the otherwise good and interesting story, there are a few issues you need to adress.
Starting with how you name the characters, instead of using the proper name, the descriptive lines is very distracting.
You should not put the speaker out of focus in this manner.
Either the name, or a variant of it, unless you use the pronoune, was it?