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Cloudhammer
I never make mistakes. I thought I'd made one once, but I was wrong.
Cloudhammer
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Helluva first deployment for poor Rain. Nice job, Hammer.
A very nice story, and a solid entry into the Winningverse. Pity we just missed getting it done in time for Cloud Kicker month, but considering the end-of-month rush of fics maybe now it will have more of a chance to stand out.
I don't think that rescue mission turned out very well...
Solid story all around.
Well buck. That's just as bad from another perspective. I'm sad now.
(Do a control F for the double period I saw. It'll be the second hit.)
Well that's a good start of full career, casualty on the 1st mission.
Well done though
Nicely done, as usual
all kinds of sad for Cloud losing her mom (again)
Nice short story, this turned out pretty good. Sad though about cloud's mom.
Interesting little snippet into the life of Rain Kicker. Wasn't much personality given the length of the fic but you managed to give a very decent amount of characterization without cramming it down our throats. Well done, I say.
Nice work, I really liked how you flashed out the other side of this section of the story without making it seem like a big deal.
I'm a sucker for POV stories, what with the different perspectives and all. Well done, Fang.
GAH! Bad Greek Naming! Stop it!
Military units are named according to the NATO Phonetic Alphabet.
Also, on a more technical note, sign and countersign calls are usually much less blatant.
3250409 'tisn't the american military, man, and I doubt they've even heard of NATO. They're talking ponies.
This was an interesting read!