• Member Since 6th Aug, 2016

DeshLune


I'm a simple person who dislikes very little and hates even less; I like (or even love) a few things: reading, gaming, Pinkie Pie, and writing; I even take story requests~!

Reviewed 15 stories
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    Created by DeshLune
    - February, 2017
Found 10 stories in 61ms

Total Words: 18,244
Estimated Reading: 1 hour

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Octavia was always well organized and responsible pony until one day she started finding eggs every time she woke up. Read as Octavia deals with madness of this situation.

She is sure of one thing only. It is all Vinyl's fault somehow.


Live reading by Mystical Reviewer.

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This story is a sequel to Shaping Love and War


Love is patient, love is kind. Love is caring, love is blind. Love knows no fear, no enemy. Love knows no no hatred or envy. Love is no game, but so much more. We are shaping love and war.

Thirteen moons, one day shy of a full year, have passed, and Screwball couldn't be happier with her soulmate, Thorax. He feels the same, but the two of them have been spending plenty more time alone than they'd like. When they finally reunite, they play Patience. Since it's a one player game, the two of them take turns watching each other and commenting on their play styles.


Edit: Now with a sequel called A Bridge Betwixt Lovers. The finale's M-rated as it contains foursome, magically enhanced sex, my first clop so I can't restrain myself... absolutely anything that comes to my dirty mind!

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Sweet Apple Acres, the home of the Apple family but also a home of apple secrets. For as long as anypony could remember, apples have been fresh and ready for harvest. Neither the cold of winter or heat of summer would prevent apples from being ripe. Natural or even supernatural disaster could not ruin a single harvest. Every day from begging to the end of the year Sweet Apple Acre had one season and one season only. Bucking season.

And now one pony wants to know why. Timid but brave Carrot Top is venturing on a quest, a quest to discover the dark secrets of apples.

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Starlight and Sunburst are dating, but they're each in love with somepony else... the two of them agree to talk about it over a card game. Things get... complicated, but they each have another secret... they're not who they say they are.

My first romance oneshot, so please comment.

The characters are actually me and StarLadybugQuinn.

New sequel!
It's called Patience of Love.

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Early Morning, May 4th, 1507 (7 years after Luna's Return)

It is the morning after the marriage of Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich, and Pinkie decides to give Cheese a very special present -- something only she could give him.

(Cover image by the excellent Cheese Sandwich artist Netta (AltoSpark)).

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Princess Celestia has a quiet dinner with an old friend. They enjoy a simple conversation that has nothing to do with the impending doom that could befall both of them in the years to come.

Except, it absolutely does.


Listen to the reading by AnEpicContrarian! Reccommended by PresentPerfect! Takes place before the events of the show. Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Princess Luna keeps much to herself. Not even her sister knows the truth lurking in the depths in her heavy heart. She puts in ink what she never could in words.

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A mysterious Alicorn arrives in Ponyville from the depths of the Everfree Forest. Who is this strange pony that no one has seen before? Where did he come from? This story tells the true story about what really should have happened.

This is my first story on here so be nice!

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Derpy's got it made this year, and she feels good. She's not-quite-Hell-bent-but-pretty-darn-determined to be the scariest whatever the heck she is, in all of modern Nightmare Night history.

But though, in her mind, she believes that she's a harmless kid at heart, who's just making her once-a-year route, the events that unfold more than blatantly prove otherwise.

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