Sweet Apple Acres, the home of the Apple family but also a home of apple secrets. For as long as anypony could remember, apples have been fresh and ready for harvest. Neither the cold of winter or heat of summer would prevent apples from being ripe. Natural or even supernatural disaster could not ruin a single harvest. Every day from begging to the end of the year Sweet Apple Acre had one season and one season only. Bucking season.
And now one pony wants to know why. Timid but brave Carrot Top is venturing on a quest, a quest to discover the dark secrets of apples.
Chapters (2)
For some reason, Berry being Irish (Scottish?) is oddly fitting.
Fantastic story! The comedy was the best part- everything was spot on
Gonna give you a like, follow and favorite this. Keep it up!
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I wasn't sure what would others think about that but glad you finding fitting. And aye t'is TV Scottish.
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Thanks, real glad to hear it.
Great ending
Enjoyable lighthearted story, brightened up my gloomy morning. Thank you for that. I really like the idea behind this, surely those ever-ripe apples are peculiar.
Be aware that Berry lost her accent at a few places. Also, try to use more commas (,), there are many sentences that would deserve one
8015029 Glad to be of service, that was my main priority. Though I actually dislike the ending because it is not that funny and makes my ass sore because of the pull I did.
I will keep in mind to be more careful with accents in the future. And yes commas my old enemies along with unnecessary long sentences that would be more logical if they were separated.
Thanks for taking your time and commenting. Have a good one.
8015128 Could have been a little more explained, but I reckon it works.
Long sentences and punctuation, classic. The more you read and write, the better you get in them, trust me.
You're welcome!
Of all of the accents I imagine Berry having, that was not one of them.... though it does fit her.
love this story
have a uppvote 
Your review is ready over at the PCaRG.
Um... missed a few words... and other small things...
The ending was... peculiar. But it was light-hearted, which matched the tone that was set within the story quite nicely.
Accents and apostrophes(') are the main thing. That I would suggest...
This has been reviewed here.
My thoughts, written as I read story;
Atta’ gal Carrot Top!
Cool story, I enjoyed the read. Now, I think I saw a 2nd chapter to this...
I reviewed this ages ago but forgot to notify you here. Sorry. I love the title and felt this could have been a very funny slapstick comedy. Unfortunately it didn't really do much with that and Berry Punch's accent drove me up the pole. The Welsh last line isn't going to work for 99% of your readers, and there are quite a few technical errors. I guess this is just a case of "first fic; things got better from here" -- as I know they did in your case.
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In hindsight I don't even consider this to be a story, more like a single scene with a really unnecessary ending. It's not something I want people to read, but it is still important to me personally.
All in all thanks for the review.