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Just a reguler guy who likes the ponies

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Before reading:

Chryslis trys to save her old friend.

Chrysalis tries to save her old friend.

After reading: Well, grammatical mistakes are a plenty. But as far as world building is concerned it is alright. I'll have it written within the hour. And I'll include it with the first batch of releases next month.

8115156 Tare it apart my good man

8115449 Yeah, I'll try to find an eider for anything I write in the future.

Almost cried. That was so good. And not to echo everyone else; but yes, you need an editor. Do you use gdocs? If so, I wouldn't mind going over this for you and editing it. Grammar is somewhat of my forte.

This was a great story I’m thinking about the ending if Luna was saved or not.

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