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  • Things I've Reviewed 15 stories Stories that I've read and written out some of my thoughts on, if sometimes only briefly.
    Created by Winston
    - July, 2015
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Total Words: 150,182
Estimated Reading: 10 hours



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The time has come for Celestia to have a one-to-one lesson with her personal protege, Twilight Sparkle. She is, no doubt, a bright young unicorn and it doesn't take her long to understand the overall concept of the teleportation and transfiguration spell. That is not to say the lesson went perfectly well as Twilight's magic takes a haywire spin and does things unimaginable coming from a foal.

Edit: Oh the stars and galaxies, this thing got featured on 05/02/2023!!! Thank you!!!

Second Edit: OMG! This is the first time my story landed on top of the featured list. Thank you so much!!!

Third Edit: Audiobook version by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbCgCNefS8A

Fourth edit: Featured on Equestria Daily

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This story is a sequel to A Trip Through the Mirror

For a changeling, love is magic, and magic is love. They are one and the same within the changeling body. To share magic is to share love. And we all know what happens when an unreformed changeling shares love. Unfortunately for Chrysalis, she got caught up in the moment and forgot for just a second. But a second was enough...

A "what if?", alternate ending for "Frenemies".

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Princess Celestia has summoned Twilight Sparkle to Canterlot for a challenging request: help ease Princess Luna back into modern society, and cure the sadness that seems to hang over her like a cloud - all before the Nightmare Night festival. But when Twilight Sparkle's perfect plan goes awry, can she rescue her ruined festival in one night?

An alternate take on what might have happened before the episode "Luna Eclipsed," we are introduced to Princess Luna in more depth, with focus on the centuries she spent before turning into Nightmare Moon. 5153 words, created especially for Scribblefest 2017!

Winner of the "Applejack Award" for Scribblefest 2017, see: https://everfreenw.com/archive/2017/events/scribblefest/index.html

Applejack Award
Apple Bottoms with “Nihtmer Niht”
The Applejack Award was one of the most contested categories we had for judging. Ultimately, Nihtmer Niht ended up winning out in the end for being very true to the show. The theme showed strongly throughout the story, and we loved the Aesop at the end, which really made this story win. Hard work paid off in the end, didn’t it, Apple Bottoms?

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Nurse Redheart has begun to question the importance of her day to day life. Is bandaging boo-boos and settling tummies really as imperative as everypony makes it out to be, or has her life become a continuous cycle of monotony?

Perhaps helping out a distressed colt will show her how meaningful the smallest acts of kindness can be.

My Entry For Everfree Northwest's Scribblefest 2017

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In Big Mac's dreams, he can fly: not with butterfly wings or those provided by magical means, but with huge, majestic, powerful pinions that match his body in strength and size. In his dreams, too, he has the courage to approach Fluttershy and ask if she'll spend time with him. One dozing daydream takes him on a wild adventure involving both secret wishes, and waking finds one has come true!

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When Twilight opens up her castle to ponies in town with friendship problems, Diamond Tiara comes looking for help with difficult problem—getting a pony she's bullied to forgive her.
So, Twilight sends Starlight Glimmer to help her. Will Starlight and Diamond Tiara be able to sort this problem out, and will Starlight be able to apply what she’s learned from this friendship mission to the few ponies who still hate her?

Cover art done by Minty25

Written for Everfree Northwest's 2017 annual write off. This years theme, growing up wild and forever free. Written with the AJ award, The true favor, most in mind.
That, and a theory I have since I got my firend Lightingsword to help out this year; If I can write a Starlight glimmer story he could enjoy, I might have a chance of winning this year :moustache:

Speaking of, please give it up for my pre-readers for this year;
Of course, my buddy who inspired in his own special way this story :p Lightingsword

My newest fim fiction friend who has helped me the most this year grow as a writer, Hap Hazard, winner of last years Dash award, as well as entering for the same award again this year

And to some of my brony YouTube/reviewer friends who pitched in at the last minutes to help;
Sparkle Chord

Season, formerly know as Brush Stroke, Who's also a writer.

And one Insane Bardock.

Thank you everyone who helped out this year.

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Graduation is supposed to be one of the best moments of your life, right? Well for Twinkleshine, it's anything but. As she begins to transition from her school life to the real world, she realizes she has no idea what to do! She could calculate the magical polarity of stars in an instant, but Celestia forbid if she has to figure out what to do with her life.

(Created for Everfree Northwest's Scribblefest 2017.)

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Celestia and Luna idolize the Tree of Harmony. It's such an old relic. They want to learn about out it but are afraid to mess with it. They are forced to decide when an evil creature takes over Equestria

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It's Rainbow's last year in Cloudsdale. Throughout her childhood, she's become used to growing up without supervision. She can make her own choices and do whatever she wants. Nothing is a challenge for her so long as she bothers to try.

There's a fly in the ointment, however. One family member in particular makes a habit of keeping an eye on Dash, and he's more than a match for Rainbow's headstrong behaviour...

An entry for EFNW 2017. Pre-reading services provided by Z (Edgelord), Verbose Mode, and ajvasquezbrony28. Coverart provided by Xadrow.

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Filthy Rich is good at a lot of things...

He always considered himself to be a good parent as well.
But when Miss Cheerilee requests a meeting with him, he may have to face the fact that his darling daughter isn't as perfect as she seems.

Featured 3/16/14 - 3/19/14

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