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Once again you did not dissapoint

I only wish this would end with Sparity.

1314549 No keep it a harem. but i think making spike the play toy would be hilarious.:pinkiecrazy:

Worth the wait.

YES, YES, YYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! The most romantic Spilight (my favorite pairinig in the entirte series) I have ever read in my entire life. you dear sire are a romantic god, if I did not already worship the gods then I would have done such for you but I have my own gods so I am sorry, that being said, I'm crying (no homo) because of this complete and utter very passionate, very honest and very loving Spilight chapter, this would have been the most perfect happy ending to a Spilight in all of history...EVER!!!!

Yet I have a feeling your not done but I can tell your a Spilight as well as Spike/Rarity fan so I say follow your heart and your heart seems to be tossing you to the best pairing in the entire series....very well played, author heart, very well played.

You know without a doubt if you need any ideas, help or advice I got your back...I'll be awaiting more of this amazing story matter of fact I'm going to re-read this perfect story from the begining and even though you have a few errors with spelling and grammer and not seprating the two long pargraphs I'll forgive you this time because it's Spilight damn it!

You made my entire week bro, no lie, thank you very much and may the gods bless you.

a most excellent chapter good sir! :moustache:
keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Damn Spike just got one hell of a hall-pass!:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:
And one question why is this story still on the hiatus if it just got updated?:rainbowhuh:

1327743 :twilightsheepish: because I'm too lazy to change it :rainbowwild:

1327931To lazy to get out of hell?:rainbowlaugh:
That a new one!:rainbowlaugh:

Wait... Three? :derpyderp1:
All three of them?:derpyderp2:
I think twi has another surprise coming :derpytongue2:

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what do you think he was surprised about when she said "all three" ? :rainbowlaugh:

but seriously... I have no idea... :derpytongue2:

1405778 yeah... she can't handle her liquor... and don't worry, the spelling get a hell of a lot better in the later chapters

Very nice work! The way this is going I can't tell if there's going to be an ending, well anyway keep up the good work.:moustache:

1461481 I'm working on it... but it seems like neither life nor my brain wants me to finish it :ajsleepy:

hopefully he doesnt get them how do they say it.... knocked up ...... actually who am i kidding im hoping they all have his seed growing inside them that would be awsome.
if luna and cel have his kid name them dusk fang and dawn fang. :pinkiehappy:
but i dont think anyone will take my advice on names for babys since everyone wants to name there kids boreing names like fredrick and rosa instead of the names vincent and lilly which i suggested :pinkiesad2:

It isn't a clop-clop, but a erotic romance. Good work, pony. Now, continue, please.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I love this chapter the most.......................................:pinkiehappy:

Dis Is Teh Most Epic Chapter you Diserve Five Mustashes. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

THIS NEEDS TO CONTINUE FOR THE LOVE OF OBLIVION GOD OF CHAOS YES!!!!!!!:moustache::coolphoto::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

There's still the last two EoH, and 3 CMCs he hasn't done yet.

2714624 I don't really know if I should include Babs or not...

2714718 He buck Sweetie Belle and you think its a bad idea?

2714750 because I started writing this when Flim and Flam were the new annoyances in town

:rainbowderp:not to be mean at all but there where many many spelling errors in just the Prologue:rainbowderp: you should really look these chapters over and fix them when you have the time:twilightsmile: but hay it happens to every one you know:twilightblush:

2888671 I know, I didn't get the chance back then to get a proof reader or an editor... and believe it or not, you should be lucky I wrote it out that good when I was commonly writing at about this level: "i not spel can inglish worth sh*t. and gramar."

I originally read this story on another site. I am so glad it was continued. I look forward to reading more of Spike exploits.:raritywink:

2889627 oh that's right... I did forget to put in the last two chapters on inkbunny didn't I :twilightblush:

and the last five on furaffinity :fluttercry:

2889982

oh that's right... I did forget to put in the last two chapters on inkbunny didn't I :twilightblush:

and the last five on furaffinity :fluttercry:

Last five? What chapter are you up to?

2890469 I only put chapters 0-3 on furaffinity... this is my primary location where I have EVERY chapter I have written so far

2888755 hahahahahahahahaha that some funny sh*t right there :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: LMFAO

I do hope that someday this will be finished, I really enjoyed it

I'm just wondering how much longer is this story going to be on hiatus?:pinkiecrazy:

3418419 you should check my blog posts... particularly this one (from a while ago) and this one (more recent)

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Why the both of them gotta have fang in there name nigga

3787327 because it sounds cool thats why,
what do you think you can think of something better?

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Not at this moment but anything is better than those 2 names( no offense bro) come on you can do better than that

3799404 the names are what i like and ill admit not as good as some but there to the point and go well together.
and to me all other names i have dont fit

4132072 dang... just 1 more day and it would've been 555 days late!

Screwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwed

you're going to finish this fanfic?

5984767 perhaps... but with my promise (which is further complicated by the fact that I've been diagnosed as "unemployable" because of my condition) and the fact that I just couldn't find a way to start the RD chapter, which I have tried a number of ways, I doubt it's going to happen any time soon... leaving it in the humongous pile of incomplete stories

are you going to finish this story

Please finish this story :applecry: :fluttercry: :raritydespair: :raritycry:

plz continue this!

… when is the possibility of this coming off hiatus?

Hello beirirangu
I have been waiting for a long time for a new chapter, is there still hope?

will it continue soon?

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