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beirirangu
lived in Germany until i was 8, then moved to Russia until i was 17 where i was moved to Florida of the USA for these last few years. So sorry if Gramatically I not very good
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My cup o tea.
Haven't read yet, but awesome original premise, and pairing at that. WTB more chrysalis fics, she is clearly the intended goddess of clop.
Nice.
very nice.
Nice, original premise. I'm honestly not a huge fan of the pairing, though it's certainly one I've never seen before, and I think it's a bit out of character for Spike to be the dominant one (though that could be just because I prefer it when females are dominant). There are a few capitalization errors scattered around the story, but nothing too major.
One thing I have to question is why you gave Chrysalis the full name "Meredith Chrysalis". It's a human name, and those are out of place in the FiM universe (the only pony I can think of with a human name is Donut Joe). Is it really necessary to give her a full name; why can't she just be called Chrysalis, her canonical name?
Anyway, this was decent, so have an upvote.
1403055 I feel you... I don't like Spike being the dominant one either, but I had to do something different from the "Queen mind control and dominance"
as for the name... I was mostly assuming that most ponies had a proper name as well as a family name: Applejack Apple, Pinkamena Pie, Twilight Sparkle, (those are mostly the only ones I know for any certainty)... So I just made up the name Meredith and stuck it on for the fun of it
and thank you for reading it
This needs a sequel, NOW!
"And that was just putting it in..."
Too good this can use one last ch where it skips into the future a bit just to tie off lose ends. Like does she ever go to town kids hybirds. That stuff.
Spike and chrysalis shipping my favorite great story keep up the great work!!!
hmmm... it ended like it was not going to be a one-shot...
EDIT: well, thats what i thought anyways
1404632<<
strange good or strange bad?
1404641 strange good. It was an unexpected find but a good one
I appreciate a well written fic about my Queen, just be sure to spell her name correctly please,..,It is 'Chrysalis' not 'Chrystalis' thank you,..,
-Ambassador of the Changelings,
Dopple Ganger
1404703 it's a slip of the tongue for me... I'm so used to writing phonetically that it's hard for me to not write the little hints of letters... I'll go change them now, and thanks for the notice
sequel NAO!
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oh god lol!
Hot hot hot! Thumbs up!
>Chrysalis and mutual love?
10/10 sequel pls
Meredith?
I don't know why put I kinda like the name.
I've only seen Spike x Chrysalis done once before, which is a little odd because considering that Spike and Big Mac are the most shipped male characters, you'd figure that it would have happened a bit more.
Aww
damn that is all that needs to be said
Chrysalis x spike,
Different, new and "awwwwwww yeeeaaaahhhhh!!!," worhty
Well done
spike whuped out the pimphand
SO MUCH YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1421410
the story was great but that comment made my day 
hahaha
It'll be a cold day in hell when I get a new favorite ship, but if another fic of this tier comes along, it's looking like we've got a coldfront coming into hades...
*drools*...DAMNIT MY KEYBOARD!!
hehe this was some interesting yeat awsome and very inmersive story...i never tought of Spike being dominant but played well...this is a really good fic and it really needs a sequel...keep up the good work :D
This was an awesome read. The pairing was a great idea!
And hey, with her he can still have any mare he wants, lol.
5/5
Hmmm... I strongly approve of this...
I imagine Rarity's reaction being "I'll destroy her!" for touching her "Spikey-Wikey".
WINING!!!!!
Is it a bad thing that I listening to GWAR's "Sexecutioner" while reading this? (Nah, I think not.
)
...s3.vidimg.popscreen.com/original/5/blNEbHl3M1UzVmcx_o_scary-butt-fun.jpg ...
Have an up-vote.
I had just recieved a very encouraging review on my FanFiction account for this very story, and I feel like I HAVE to express it (the first one) as well as two other reviews that I honestly wanted to share for a while (and there are still more reviews here)
UltranationalistPatriot-257 11/27/12
Elizander 10/6/12
dALEkilLsU 10/23/12
1699664 Sequel plz?
2237023
I'm seriously thinking about it... but as I've said a few times, I made a promise that I would not write stories until I get a job (and I have been searching ever since making that stupid promise, but at least I have an internship... that's something right?)
2237227 Hmm, I suppose it's an admirable, though slightly confusing, promise.
I do hope you can get a job soon, 'cause I would really love a sequel to this. It's a damn fine piece of porn, and it's a pretty decent story in it's own right. Lots of promise for expansion.
2237351 yes, but the question is which direction to head the story in now... I think I might post a blog asking how they would like to see it continued... but the problem with "when I get to writing again" is still the problem...
2237485 There's a few routes you could take this, but I would believe that the sequel would have to be set at some indeterminate time in the future. At least a few months to a year to allow for the relationship to grow and evolve.
Of the routes I could think of off the top of my head would involve three obvious choices:
1) Discovery of Chrysalis
1a) Discovery her, and her relationship with Spike
1b) In keeping with the fact that Discord was recently reformed (something that I...question), a willing reveal in an effort to take the relationship not only further, but public using this very event as a means of defending her from any objections to this
2) Complications in their relationship due to things like say...pregnancy (heh, dragon changelings) or through stress of keeping it a secret
3) Complications involving other changelings either looking for, and finding, her for some reason (either hostile or peaceful), or other changelings causing problems elsewhere (or just other changelings being caught near enough to Ponyville for folks to start getting a little paranoid and nosy) resulting in perhaps an active Royal Guard presence
Of course, these are merely ideas that I just thought of off the top of my head. It's ultimately your decision in which direction you want to go.
Of course, your promise does hinder the implementation of such ideas.
2237734 and of course there are subgroups of almost all of those as well, for example: just the 1a sub-catagories I can think of off the top of my head:
1a1) Twilight discovers Spike and her true form
...a) accepts as Spike's decision but keeps sharp eye on her
...b) thinks she's attacking Spike
...b1) Spike stops twilight and shows her it's real
...b2) Twi attacks before Spike can say anything and fight with her refusing to believe it's actual love
...c) keeps hidden and decides to talk with Spike at home
...d) keeps hidden and tells others beside Spike (like celestia and think spike has been hypnotised like shinning)
...d1) Celestia explains that dragons are immune to those kinds of magic
...d2) Celestia thinks another attack and strikes
1a2) Twilight discovers Spike and her as pony
...a) confronts and accepts her as his marefriend and believe that because their love is strange they do this in secret
...b) confronts them during the act and try to find out what's happening (aggressively)
...b1) they make up that she's his marefriend
...b2) she tells truth
...c) she sees her as a particular pony
...c1) Twi sees herself ***ing Spike
...c2) Twi sees Rarity ***ing Spike
and so forth...
it's not that easy, is it? and a writer has to deal with all of these possiblities... though often with one in mind before starting where I just wanted Spike to do Queen Chrysalis
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The first of the 1a1 set sounds the most plausible of them, given Twilight's studious nature it would not be a stretch for her to already know about a dragon's natural immunities.
The second of that set would be more fitting for Rainbow Dash, given her tendency to rush to conclusions and general lack of knowledge of anything that isn't Wonderbolt or trick-related. I could see her either outright attacking, or raising the alarm and getting everypony up in arms about the whole thing.
Writing is most assuredly not easy, but it can be very rewarding if done right.
2238082 well if I may say, what if she has a mental scar from the invasion from when she saw shinning having his life-force sucked out from the fake Candace and all the other stuff that caused her rational thought process to succumb to the emotional side of her thinking she needs to save her #1 assistant unlike what she didn't do with Shinning... just saying... traumatic events tend to leave people in weird mental states, why else would there be such a thing as PTSD (Posttraumatic stress disorder)
and yeah, I can see RD doing something like that... I'm just saying that these are all things I've thought of before and given thought as to what direction I want to go... and I can't decide
2238111 Your idea is rather true. Given all that happened during that fiasco, it'd be understandable for her to have some issues with changelings.
As for the other thing, well, I believe it's a good idea to have someone to bounce ideas off of. It certainly helps for me.
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and it certainly helps me too... but it would also help to get some new ideas (no offence)
2238163 It would help if you one knew just which direction you want to take the story. What else besides romance do want? Your plot should fit the direction you wish to take the story in.
2238225 and that's precisely the point... I don't know... even when I started writing: here are literally ALL of my notes I had before writing the story you read:
2238361 I suppose that is the downside when you work off of someone else's idea. I just took notice that this was a request fic.