Spike and everyone
Only ten percent of the paragraph breaks I have seen here are properly placed.This is a well written story, just nowhere NEAR a well edited story.
244294I know perfecty well that it not good grammar in language i not very familiar with... I good enough to order food, not write book...
also, not using as excuse, but i forced to write between phone calls and legal things about a family member that died...
271324i not spell can english worth sh*tand grammar
I'm not sure why, but I am perfectly, -perfectly- okay with this.
good story... i want to see were this goes... tracking
now im just replacing old spike, with spike from .MOV
Could you please find a proof reader/editor to correct the small mistakes? This has the potential to be one of the best stories
Spikes a goddamn pussy.
Spike is God not a pussy!
Only ten percent of the paragraph breaks I have seen here are properly placed.
This is a well written story, just nowhere NEAR a well edited story.
244294
I know perfecty well that it not good grammar in language i not very familiar with... I good enough to order food, not write book...
also, not using as excuse, but i forced to write between phone calls and legal things about a family member that died...
271324
i not spell can english worth sh*t
and grammar
I'm not sure why, but I am perfectly, -perfectly- okay with this.
good story... i want to see were this goes... tracking
now im just replacing old spike, with spike from .MOV
Could you please find a proof reader/editor to correct the small mistakes? This has the potential to be one of the best stories
Spikes a goddamn pussy.
Spike is God not a pussy!