Nice to see a new chapter for this. It's sad to hear that your GF left you, but a bit unusual for someone to leave without a known reason. It raises suspicion if you ask me. Anyways, good chapter as always. I'll be waiting for the next.
I couldn't stop laughing throughout, reading a dragon and ponies talk about "cocks" was too funny for me, now exscuse me while I go murder my inner 14 year old
You really didn't waste any time getting 'down' to 'business' in this chapter.
Despite all the mares that Spike has boned so far being clean, I expect him to either get an STD or for his dick to fall off from so much fuckin.
FUCKING CLIFFHANGER!! ..... Heheheh, the cliffhanger is fucking...
The lack of editor shows unfortunately. Fun chapter containing one of my favorite pairs regardless of grammer derps.
Woona
Who is Spike gonna penetrate next?
BTW, are Shining Armor and Cadence going to be added to the master list of people for Spike to fuck? Just curious since they 'came' on the scene after you started writing this.
my GF left me too, but insted of thinking to much over what i did wrong i just moved on it's not as easy as it seams but trust me, if you dwell on it for to long of too much youre gonna loose a big piece of your life
Awesome chapter and story I always like to see Spike paired up with different mares, I for one can't wait for the Pinkie Pie chapter. I hope you can get past your problem with your GF, and if she can't give you a reason for the breakup it can't be a very good reason.
843356 I'm trying... but It's not easy... especially when the last thing she said to me was "I'll see you tomorrow." 843093 three things: 1) you expect the land of Equestria to be filled with STDs? Hm... you know I've never thought of that... 2) as for the cliff-hanger and who he's going to do next, it's like with the Fluttershy chapter, I held her answer until the beginning of the next... 3) I might have candace/shinning, but I'd like to focus more on single mares... 843495 I'm going to be honest with you here: I know I'm going to write it when I get to it, but Pinkie freaks me the **** out (and this was before I read cupcakes) Because I had studied psychology for a time and know that she could actually snap like that... I mean did you see how quickly she went to schizophrenia when the girls didn't go to her parties? But I digress, even if she freaks me out, I will still pair her as a loving character with my favorite pony
Doctor: Spike, the results are in. : What is it doc?! Give it to me straight! Doctor: .....You have an advanced case of Super AIDS, Gonorihia, Syphilis, Crabs, Hepatitis A-C, Avian Flu, Hemmaroids, Bronchitis, and your somehow pregnant. :.... :
:? :Holy shit.... :How does that even....WHAT?! : NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! : I TOTALLY did not see this coming when I gave him a magical dick Doctor: Your blood right now Spike is the most toxic substance in all of Equestria and as such you need to be disposed of as if you were a hazardous substance. : Though who is the father? Doctor: You are Spike, and I don't know how. Maybe you fucked yourself so hard that you impregnated yourself?*shrug*
STD's do give you a way to end this story on a cautionary downer (though if your briliant enough, you could pull off a hilarious one, just dont ask me how)
Though how do you embark on a project like this WITHOUT thinking "Man. If this was real life, Spike would catch something pretty damn quick"?
God, that I don't believe in, finally a new chapter! I thought it was never coming, circumstances kinda blow notably, but still YES! Also, I noticed you said single mares, did you decide against doing stallions... I'd be more then okay with that.
I feel inspired! Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies shall be finished tomorrow this I swear! Posted based on my editor, who may or may not get to it quickly knowing him.
Yes, a new chapter... and yeah... It's sad, but I'm getting over it, bit by bit...
And yeah, I said "Single mares"... But i'm sure I'm going to get hell if I don't put in at least 1 chapter or something... pervy gay friends (I'll make sure Spike's only using his cock, maybe dominating him or something... I duno...)
and That's excelent to hear!! I can't wait to read it! (and I can't wait for a new chapter of "Weekend maid" either)
854222 You should troll um get to the sex and be like "Spike grew his cock and looked at the waiting stallion. Suddenly he spoke up, "Nope can't do it. I don't swing that way," and with that Spike walked out and went to find a mare to fuck."
855414 The whole idea of you doing a gay scene screams bad idea. I'ts not that I have anything against gays, but your not gay. And as such, you probably don't even know how to make it realistic, much the same reason I won't write pure lesbian clop. On top of that you have no interest really in doing it, so it's going to be rather miserable. At least the overly romanticized lesbian clops by male writers, have enough interest in the matter to give it some passion. Your gonna end up writing the scene alone the lines of "and then they fucked" and be all .
855745 I know what you're saying, I respect all people for who they are. I'm not gay, but I can't say I haven't thought about those kinds of things, as I'm sure everyone else has at one point or another... Hm... but you do have a point there about it probably being a miserable piece and making it into a "and then they all fucked" fic... But to be honest, that's what I initially intended and made no point in hiding it... and as for why I don't write Lesbian clop is that I'm honestly not into it...
857167 yeah... that's what I thought you were trying to say... but I see it as along the lines of after the description of the scene, just replace what you'd say with a girl to what you'd describe with a... man
I liked this chapter, but what was wrong was that Applejack just blurted out she didn't have a special somepony. You need to give in more details in that, to FEEEL. Anyways great chapter.
Nice to see a new chapter for this. It's sad to hear that your GF left you, but a bit unusual for someone to leave without a known reason. It raises suspicion if you ask me. Anyways, good chapter as always. I'll be waiting for the next.
I couldn't stop laughing throughout, reading a dragon and ponies talk about "cocks" was too funny for me, now exscuse me while I go murder my inner 14 year old
You really didn't waste any time getting 'down' to 'business' in this chapter.
Despite all the mares that Spike has boned so far being clean, I expect him to either get an STD or for his dick to fall off from so much fuckin.
FUCKING CLIFFHANGER!!
..... Heheheh, the cliffhanger is fucking...
The lack of editor shows unfortunately. Fun chapter containing one of my favorite pairs regardless of grammer derps.
Woona
Who is Spike gonna penetrate next?
BTW, are Shining Armor and Cadence going to be added to the master list of people for Spike to fuck? Just curious since they 'came' on the scene after you started writing this.
my GF left me too, but insted of thinking to much over what i did wrong i just moved on
it's not as easy as it seams but trust me, if you dwell on it for to long of too much youre gonna loose a big piece of your life
by the way, greeat story
Awesome chapter and story I always like to see Spike paired up with different mares, I for one can't wait for the Pinkie Pie chapter. I hope you can get past your problem with your GF, and if she can't give you a reason for the breakup it can't be a very good reason.
843356
I'm trying... but It's not easy... especially when the last thing she said to me was "I'll see you tomorrow."
843093
three things: 1) you expect the land of Equestria to be filled with STDs? Hm... you know I've never thought of that... 2) as for the cliff-hanger and who he's going to do next, it's like with the Fluttershy chapter, I held her answer until the beginning of the next... 3) I might have candace/shinning, but I'd like to focus more on single mares...
843495
I'm going to be honest with you here: I know I'm going to write it when I get to it, but Pinkie freaks me the **** out (and this was before I read cupcakes) Because I had studied psychology for a time and know that she could actually snap like that... I mean did you see how quickly she went to schizophrenia when the girls didn't go to her parties?
But I digress, even if she freaks me out, I will still pair her as a loving character with my favorite pony
844439 the '' iil see you tomorrow'' must had hurt like hell
844439 WHAT?! OH GOD! What have I done!!
Doctor: Spike, the results are in.
: What is it doc?! Give it to me straight!
Doctor: .....You have an advanced case of Super AIDS, Gonorihia, Syphilis, Crabs, Hepatitis A-C, Avian Flu, Hemmaroids, Bronchitis, and your somehow pregnant.
:....
:
:?
:Holy shit....
:How does that even....WHAT?!
: NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
: I TOTALLY did not see this coming when I gave him a magical dick
Doctor: Your blood right now Spike is the most toxic substance in all of Equestria and as such you need to be disposed of as if you were a hazardous substance.
: Though who is the father?
Doctor: You are Spike, and I don't know how. Maybe you fucked yourself so hard that you impregnated yourself?*shrug*
STD's do give you a way to end this story on a cautionary downer (though if your briliant enough, you could pull off a hilarious one, just dont ask me how)
Though how do you embark on a project like this WITHOUT thinking "Man. If this was real life, Spike would catch something pretty damn quick"?
844439 Spike is a swagon not a pony.
God, that I don't believe in, finally a new chapter! I thought it was never coming, circumstances kinda blow notably, but still YES! Also, I noticed you said single mares, did you decide against doing stallions... I'd be more then okay with that.
I feel inspired! Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies shall be finished tomorrow this I swear! Posted based on my editor, who may or may not get to it quickly knowing him.
Now to just get rid of my family for a few hours... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
854085
Yes, a new chapter... and yeah... It's sad, but I'm getting over it, bit by bit...
And yeah, I said "Single mares"... But i'm sure I'm going to get hell if I don't put in at least 1 chapter or something... pervy gay friends (I'll make sure Spike's only using his cock, maybe dominating him or something... I duno...)
and That's excelent to hear!! I can't wait to read it! (and I can't wait for a new chapter of "Weekend maid" either)
854222 You should troll um get to the sex and be like "Spike grew his cock and looked at the waiting stallion. Suddenly he spoke up, "Nope can't do it. I don't swing that way," and with that Spike walked out and went to find a mare to fuck."
855357
I might just do that...
855414 The whole idea of you doing a gay scene screams bad idea. I'ts not that I have anything against gays, but your not gay. And as such, you probably don't even know how to make it realistic, much the same reason I won't write pure lesbian clop. On top of that you have no interest really in doing it, so it's going to be rather miserable. At least the overly romanticized lesbian clops by male writers, have enough interest in the matter to give it some passion. Your gonna end up writing the scene alone the lines of "and then they fucked" and be all .
855745
I know what you're saying, I respect all people for who they are. I'm not gay, but I can't say I haven't thought about those kinds of things, as I'm sure everyone else has at one point or another...
Hm... but you do have a point there about it probably being a miserable piece and making it into a "and then they all fucked" fic... But to be honest, that's what I initially intended and made no point in hiding it...
and as for why I don't write Lesbian clop is that I'm honestly not into it...
856049 Well I meant that chapter would be detail-less. I do prefer hetero as well.
857167
yeah... that's what I thought you were trying to say... but I see it as along the lines of after the description of the scene, just replace what you'd say with a girl to what you'd describe with a... man
857184 And Pinkie proves my point. Each girl is different in details can't really play that one out.
I liked this chapter, but what was wrong was that Applejack just blurted out she didn't have a special somepony. You need to give in more details in that, to FEEEL. Anyways great chapter.
im pretty sure big mac would say one thing...NICE