First of all....GO SPILIGHT!!!!!!! FOREVER AND EVER!!!!!!! On another note, this is one of my top five favorite pairings....just not sure which, sort of disappionted that Spike was not having any pleasure out of sleeping with Sweetie Belle, poor Sweetie.....who is my all time favorite CMC...but hey, I understand what Spike is going through...ok maybe not because his view is TRUE LOVE to Twilight but...you know, anyway....you have some spelling and grammer errors that need to be corrected, if you like I can help you out with this chapter....best one ever will be the Spike/Twilight one of course,. and I seriously can't wait to read it......this just gets better and better and this story and chapter made my entire night.....I think I'll read it from chapter one again.
913588 thank you... and it really helps to know the language better... you should've seen my work when I just moved here: "ai speld tings verse den dis did." and just almost a month ago: 271661
1286803 I know what you're saying, but it's kinda hard for me to get over the meme "X is bad and you should feel bad"... there are PLENTY of other videos out there that you could use... like
damn you damn you to hell now i have to wait for the rest of the cmc as well as the twilight chapter are you happy now? are you?!
aside from that love the story please keep it up
First of all....GO SPILIGHT!!!!!!! FOREVER AND EVER!!!!!!! On another note, this is one of my top five favorite pairings....just not sure which, sort of disappionted that Spike was not having any pleasure out of sleeping with Sweetie Belle, poor Sweetie.....who is my all time favorite CMC...but hey, I understand what Spike is going through...ok maybe not because his view is TRUE LOVE to Twilight but...you know, anyway....you have some spelling and grammer errors that need to be corrected, if you like I can help you out with this chapter....best one ever will be the Spike/Twilight one of course,. and I seriously can't wait to read it......this just gets better and better and this story and chapter made my entire night.....I think I'll read it from chapter one again.
Also...GO SPIKEBELLE!
nice
nice chapter and also, awesome we have the same birthday
876677
well then happy birthday
876713 thank you. happy birthday to you as well
Pretty awesome chapter and happy brithday bro!
Happy Belated Birthday!
Did... Sweetie just essentially rape Spike?
905265
thank you...
and yes... that was basically what I wrote... but they were both happy in the end... right?
913588
thank you... and it really helps to know the language better... you should've seen my work when I just moved here: "ai speld tings verse den dis did."
and just almost a month ago: 271661
this fic is awesome
i look forward to the next update
1286803
I know what you're saying, but it's kinda hard for me to get over the meme "X is bad and you should feel bad"...
there are PLENTY of other videos out there that you could use... like
Spike... raped by SweetBelle?! WTF?!! This is work from Discord! i470.photobucket.com/albums/rr62/afega300/MLP_FIM/mlp-diswub.png
I can really appreciate the irony of Sweetie accusing Spike of raping Rarity, before preceding to rape Spike.
Well did not see that coming......... Really I didn't see it coming I mean that was like foreplay I'll be scared to death