nice tell her welcome to the herd. and nice story i hope you can up date soon. u had small mistakes spelling and spacing but thats all. you may have had more but im not a english student. anyways very nice and hope to read more soon.
357274 *reads the plan* Oh God.... I think the crazy train is going to go barrel rolling off the rails into madness while bees are attacking everyone everywhere, including their eyes, while burning, at around the Big Mac chapter. From Big Mac onward, it looks like pure unadulterated madness. Spike might as well stand on a tall stool in the middle of the town and just jizz on everyone like a jizz spraying sprinkler. (I think that was the best sentence that I have typed to date)
The plan needs some grammer and spelling fixin for wide pop consumption.
Then again, a fic thats just plain bannanas is fun to have on the ol tracking list.
358750 was... was planning... but mostly i was wanting to write them for the sake of them being there... because for the life of me, i can't find most of the pairings...
plus that was one of my conserns as well... not making it repeditive...
400842 If you don't want to write it, then don't. Alternatively, you could just make those AU side-stories. But seriously, regardless of your friend asking you to write it, if you do write it as part of the story, I'm not reading it.
401800 i respect that... and as i said with starcat5: (or at least tried to mean) "I'm labeling the chapters by who spike's with, so those who don't want to read about that pairing don't have to."
402505 That would be fine for a fic that was a collection of one-shots, but here each chapter builds upon the last in a canon. A canon where Spike is into guys is not one I'm interested in.
403076 when was this ever about him being into guys? i have NEVER said he was... or EVER will be...
I originally made this to be a series of one-shots... but i got caught up in the storyline and desire for a untimate sparity end...
PS i like yaoi (guys on guys) as much as i like yuri (girls on girls) which is not at all! but i still wrote three yuri fanfics for my friends (long before MLPFIM)
403376 hmm now theirs an idea you could toss the yaoi/gay ones up as one-shots (probly set um up as their own story maybe toss a link in the description) and keeps this more hetero/straight maybe the occasional 3 ways cause the writings great and skipping the yaoi chapters would be vaible as one shots but you have a story going here and it seems details that will matter latter could be skipped over as well which would be sad face of doom as it were.
Obviously its your call but if nothing else it would be cool if you had the details at the start of the chapters afterwords kind of a summery minus the gay sex for those of us who would rather bypass it
Also yay for the ultimate spartiy ending
PS looking over the plan i didn't see any yuri tossed in their and ya no 3 ways are a gray zone /shrug but i do somewhat agree if you don't really wana write the story that way you shouldn't its your story even my suggestion is just that a suggestion
but one thing i have to disagree with is the yuri (lesbian sex) BECAUSE this is a fanfic DIRECTLY about Spike... if anything it would be him and two females... which shouldn't be present right now because the story is just getting going... maybe in the later chapters like scootaloo where applebloom and sweetiebelle help spike out to give her the pleasure they felt with him...
430076 right right i was just saying you said you weren't into none hetro couples and as such you didn't have any lesbian/yuri pairings (which i agree wouldn't make sence outside of a 3 way for the story)
Also why you may not have wrote it in any detail (though i hope you do) you did just have celestia walk in on spike and luna and seem rather suggestive of a 3 way (possible bonus chapter mayhap if you hadn't really planned on following up their)
475182 I posted this on your main page. I already read your chapters, and I couldn't get into FimFiction, so I couldn't post. When you post a comment on the main page, it defaults to the latest chapter in the story.
475209 well either way... i respect your opinion not to like it... i don't claim to be a good author, but at least i can say that some people like it and just 1 person liking it is more then enough for me
202461 big mac and Applejack i get, and i'm sideing with you about Spike being in a Relationship with Celestia or Twilight, but, i see nothing much wrong with Celestia and Twilight doing it. i mean yes, Celestia is like a mom to Twilight, and i am neutrol on this shipping stuff (though i joined this Twilestia group for the sake of finding alternate ways to getting stories noticed with the brown box gone) but, Twilestia isn't bad. also, Celestia may be a motherly figure, but that doesn't mean Celestia IS Twilight's mom. in fact in one episode about the Mane 6 reveling her origins we actselly seen (albeit once so far) Twilight's Mom and Dad. i mean, i get if your not into shipping (or if you are, are you a fan of Twilight getting it on with the rest of the mane 6 or one of the very few male characters, or even Luna since you let her off the hook so easily?) and, i confess this is a disterbing clopfic (this is coming from someone who wrote two Twiliestia fics and a Luna-dash on the way) but because Spike was a minor (or in dragon's sense), at least Twilight and Celestia are sexully mature. but hey, we have our opinions. if you think Twilight being in a relationship with a goddess is , that's fine. let's agree on a few things: that a Spilestia clopfic series shouldn't catch on, and to agree, to disagree. again, i am neutrol on these kind of fics as well, so don't confuse me as an easily enragable Twilestia fan, but as someone with a neutrol but positive prosective on it and was just offering a reasonable, logitcal explaination why this: +- to you, could be this: +- to someone else.
but again, you have your opinions' and i have mine, and everyone here as their opinions. but at least know i am just against Spike getting premature sex as anyone here is.
481656 don't suppose you'v had her read so she knows of the gift shes robbing the herd from? (You'd be amazed how well this sort of solution to these kinda problems works)
If your looking for a back up proofreader, I'll be happy to go over it and edit the chapters for you. BTW, good story so far. I'm a little sad that it's on hiatus, but I'm really patient when it comes to good stories. 3 moustached Spikes for you.
597697 thank you for the offer and the compliment.
it's in hiatus because of a number of things going on in my life right now... it has nothing to do with not wanting to finish, but a little about how to write more without being repeditive
597788 That is completely understandable. The way I look at things is that it is more important to put real life problems first before doing something else, in this case: writing chapters. From the numerous fanfic's I've read(I feel like Twilight from all the reading), a good way to write things that don't feel repetitive is to throw a twist here and there. It may be out of the comfort zone, but nothing ventured will equal nothing gained. Anyways, I'll be waiting.
Luna FTW more eventually Soon I Hope
nice tell her welcome to the herd. and nice story i hope you can up date soon. u had small mistakes spelling and spacing but thats all. you may have had more but im not a english student. anyways very nice and hope to read more soon.
355831
just 1 sec... i'm going to put back my originl plan for the chapters (it was the first thing i posted here)... and edit it just a bit...
357274 *reads the plan*
Oh God....
I think the crazy train is going to go barrel rolling off the rails into madness while bees are attacking everyone everywhere, including their eyes, while burning, at around the Big Mac chapter. From Big Mac onward, it looks like pure unadulterated madness.
Spike might as well stand on a tall stool in the middle of the town and just jizz on everyone like a jizz spraying sprinkler. (I think that was the best sentence that I have typed to date)
The plan needs some grammer and spelling fixin for wide pop consumption.
Then again, a fic thats just plain bannanas is fun to have on the ol tracking list.
I'll bring my poncho and umbrella.
357618
i know how you feel... but the friends that overheard me talking about this insisted that i have them... (pervy, gay friends... )
its cool i understand
358750
was... was planning... but mostly i was wanting to write them for the sake of them being there... because for the life of me, i can't find most of the pairings...
plus that was one of my conserns as well... not making it repeditive...
*reads plan* Spike and... Big Mac? Well, I'm out of here.
400283
read my other comment:
357647
400842
If you don't want to write it, then don't. Alternatively, you could just make those AU side-stories. But seriously, regardless of your friend asking you to write it, if you do write it as part of the story, I'm not reading it.
401800
i respect that... and as i said with starcat5: (or at least tried to mean) "I'm labeling the chapters by who spike's with, so those who don't want to read about that pairing don't have to."
402505
That would be fine for a fic that was a collection of one-shots, but here each chapter builds upon the last in a canon. A canon where Spike is into guys is not one I'm interested in.
403076
when was this ever about him being into guys? i have NEVER said he was... or EVER will be...
I originally made this to be a series of one-shots... but i got caught up in the storyline and desire for a untimate sparity end...
PS i like yaoi (guys on guys) as much as i like yuri (girls on girls) which is not at all! but i still wrote three yuri fanfics for my friends (long before MLPFIM)
403376 hmm now theirs an idea you could toss the yaoi/gay ones up as one-shots (probly set um up as their own story maybe toss a link in the description) and keeps this more hetero/straight maybe the occasional 3 ways cause the writings great and skipping the yaoi chapters would be vaible as one shots but you have a story going here and it seems details that will matter latter could be skipped over as well which would be sad face of doom as it were.
Obviously its your call but if nothing else it would be cool if you had the details at the start of the chapters afterwords kind of a summery minus the gay sex for those of us who would rather bypass it
Also yay for the ultimate spartiy ending
PS looking over the plan i didn't see any yuri tossed in their and ya no 3 ways are a gray zone /shrug but i do somewhat agree if you don't really wana write the story that way you shouldn't its your story even my suggestion is just that a suggestion
PSS either way keep writing the story!
429175 you know that's what i'm thinking...
but one thing i have to disagree with is the yuri (lesbian sex) BECAUSE this is a fanfic DIRECTLY about Spike... if anything it would be him and two females... which shouldn't be present right now because the story is just getting going... maybe in the later chapters like scootaloo where applebloom and sweetiebelle help spike out to give her the pleasure they felt with him...
430076 right right i was just saying you said you weren't into none hetro couples and as such you didn't have any lesbian/yuri pairings (which i agree wouldn't make sence outside of a 3 way for the story)
Also why you may not have wrote it in any detail (though i hope you do) you did just have celestia walk in on spike and luna and seem rather suggestive of a 3 way (possible bonus chapter mayhap if you hadn't really planned on following up their)
430508 suggestive threeway
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475159
can't tell if don't like story or don't like on hiatus
475174 Guess. (hint: it's the first one)
475177
just sayin that normally people say they don't like it on the chapter they got to... (1st or 2nd) it says you got to the last chapter (7th)
475182 I posted this on your main page. I already read your chapters, and I couldn't get into FimFiction, so I couldn't post. When you post a comment on the main page, it defaults to the latest chapter in the story.
475209 well either way... i respect your opinion not to like it... i don't claim to be a good author, but at least i can say that some people like it and just 1 person liking it is more then enough for me
202461 big mac and Applejack i get, and i'm sideing with you about Spike being in a Relationship with Celestia or Twilight, but, i see nothing much wrong with Celestia and Twilight doing it. i mean yes, Celestia is like a mom to Twilight, and i am neutrol on this shipping stuff (though i joined this Twilestia group for the sake of finding alternate ways to getting stories noticed with the brown box gone) but, Twilestia isn't bad. also, Celestia may be a motherly figure, but that doesn't mean Celestia IS Twilight's mom. in fact in one episode about the Mane 6 reveling her origins we actselly seen (albeit once so far) Twilight's Mom and Dad. i mean, i get if your not into shipping (or if you are, are you a fan of Twilight getting it on with the rest of the mane 6 or one of the very few male characters, or even Luna since you let her off the hook so easily?) and, i confess this is a disterbing clopfic (this is coming from someone who wrote two Twiliestia fics and a Luna-dash on the way) but because Spike was a minor (or in dragon's sense), at least Twilight and Celestia are sexully mature. but hey, we have our opinions. if you think Twilight being in a relationship with a goddess is , that's fine. let's agree on a few things: that a Spilestia clopfic series shouldn't catch on, and to agree, to disagree. again, i am neutrol on these kind of fics as well, so don't confuse me as an easily enragable Twilestia fan, but as someone with a neutrol but positive prosective on it and was just offering a reasonable, logitcal explaination
why this:
+- to you, could be this:
+- to someone else.
but again, you have your opinions' and i have mine, and everyone here as their opinions. but at least know i am just against Spike getting premature sex as anyone here is.
still can't get the gf into letting you work on this huh ahh eternal sad face of doom
481606 nope... but she said regular romance is ok... that's why i took the idea for "Spikes 'a Plenty" when i could
481656 don't suppose you'v had her read so she knows of the gift shes robbing the herd from? (You'd be amazed how well this sort of solution to these kinda problems works)
481695 I've tried... she never budged... but i'm still working on it
481721 I'll keep the faith however thats as far as brilliant suggestion i have go
If your looking for a back up proofreader, I'll be happy to go over it and edit the chapters for you.
BTW, good story so far. I'm a little sad that it's on hiatus, but I'm really patient when it comes to good stories. 3 moustached Spikes for you.
597697 thank you for the offer and the compliment.
it's in hiatus because of a number of things going on in my life right now... it has nothing to do with not wanting to finish, but a little about how to write more without being repeditive
597788 That is completely understandable. The way I look at things is that it is more important to put real life problems first before doing something else, in this case: writing chapters. From the numerous fanfic's I've read(I feel like Twilight from all the reading), a good way to write things that don't feel repetitive is to throw a twist here and there. It may be out of the comfort zone, but nothing ventured will equal nothing gained. Anyways, I'll be waiting.
THREESOME PLZ!
Rarity going to kill a bitch o.o
Run spike save yourself!!!
you got your Own pegasister? HIGH FIVE BRO.
Rarity gonna kill a nigga
Replace "music" with "story", "bad" with good", and the "boo" with "yeah!"
1286714 how will she beat celestia and luna. i mean they are princesses
Huh who new spike was sucha player?