.....this is good really good make more!

What happen to Ch.4

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I took off Table Of Contents... still debating why i put there if i put back

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271324 Lol!

lolololololololololololol this chapter

spanking her until her diamonds turned into rubies.

That line made the whole chapter.

Your missing something

*9 months later*

rarity gives birth to a new species know as kirin/qilin proving that dragons and unicorns can mate and have offspring.

Spike the Pimp? Wounder how Pinkie go blow

It seems Twilight is quite the alcoholic.

I think you should run this story, and your other one, through a spellchecker. That would fix up most of the spelling and grammar mistakes.

1405778 hey an egghead gotta have fun am my i right lol

Sorry about your legs

"Yes! Harder! I've been so bad!" She couldn't help herself, she was screeming in extacy, she didn't care who could hear her, she wanted to yell it from the rooftops if she could.

Hmmmm... kinda kinky.