And hear I can place a full review of the chapter even though I've already read it. This story deserves some comments.
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Spike implements the new item he has acquired. Celestia is very generous, isn't she? Either way, I'm sure it will lead to more hot scenes and more descriptive writing.
(Sorry about the empty comments. Something's wrong with FIM...)
Very good chapter, with only the occasional spelling or grammar mistake, please update again soon. Really surprised me with the fluttershy chapter though....
wow, the difference between no editing and a single edit, its amazing, and it allows your creativity and skill to shine out and show people what you can do. keep it up
And hear I can place a full review of the chapter even though I've already read it. This story deserves some comments.
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Spike implements the new item he has acquired. Celestia is very generous, isn't she? Either way, I'm sure it will lead to more hot scenes and more descriptive writing.
(Sorry about the empty comments. Something's wrong with FIM...)
Very good chapter, with only the occasional spelling or grammar mistake, please update again soon. Really surprised me with the fluttershy chapter though....
Just out of curiosity, are we going to see an AJ, Dash, and/or Pinkie chapter?
286036 She is being generous because of what she gets in return and what she gets is the bets experience in her life
celestia sounds like a horny school girl...I'm really starting to like this.
wow, the difference between no editing and a single edit, its amazing, and it allows your creativity and skill to shine out and show people what you can do. keep it up