There, in the Everfree Forest, Twilight Sparkle and I stood facing each other, my Nexus - the Dragon Weyr - looming over us. "Ponies," Twilight Sparkle softly intoned, "have a place here. You do not."
At this, I blinked. Then, crouching down to her level, I replied, "Really?"
Twilight nodded.
"Who the fuck died and made you God, bitch?" I responded. Then, as Twilight's jaw dropped open, I promptly turned and reentered the Weyr, the massive psi-steel doors of the Gate of Dawn slamming closed behind me with a resounding BOOM.
The Gate wouldn't open to admit a pony ever again.
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..Ok?
Aside from being one of the shortest things i have seen on this site...
What just happened?
A story in less than 150 words.
I have a feeling this was a potshot at another story on the site.
So Coranth, care to share the background of this story?
5126710
Personally it reminds me of this one here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/187732/after-the-end
5126710 Specifically, Twilight's words from Chapter 6 of this story, wherein she comments on a human girl named Curry Comb.
I thought that was just... off.
5129818 Consider here how Blueblood acted in Canon towards Rarity... then quad it for his Father. Also imagine that he was one of those parents who are always working and never have any time for their kids... and when he was home, it was always, "Nobles, son, don't do this/don't do that..." Like Merida's Mother in the film, Brave.
In other words, an absolutely awful parent, who saw poor Blue as an heir or legacy and status symbol rather than a living, thinking, feeling colt with his own dreams...