If anyone wants a link to the original pic, then you can find it here.
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Gggity, giggity, giggity goo. Seriously, I love this pairing.

Es ist extrem lustig, wie Photo Finish einen deutschen Akzent hat
Das ist auch der Grund, warum dieser Kommentar deutsch ist^^

O.o

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There are a couple of languages I wish I spoke, and German is one of them. This was easy enough to translate but some of it is difficult.

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A sequel is in the works right now though will not feature as much Ironshy. It's not about clop but will feature it.

cute and nicely written, although I don't really care for the anal, but still going in favorites. and looking forward to the sequel

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The one problem I had with this entire story was Photo's spit gargling accent. When spoken out loud, it sounds like no German accent I have ever heard.

I'll be honest.....I could not understand a word Photo was saying, so I skipped over this chapter Sorry and I have nothing against this pairing but I was so confused about what was happening I'm so sorry my friend, seriously

2361672 That's because the author doesn't speak German.

German..... Sounds disgusting. Sorry for anyone who speaks it.

Now that is a good set up for another story Great work on this chapter

I love the fact that you added dialogue that worked rather than just adding the standard "sex sounds". You revealed everyone's personalities and opinions, as well as happenings around them. Dialogue+Clop=Superb Story

Big Mac Approved.

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I take pride in my writing and want to do all I can to show that this is a whole world going on.

How did the concept come up? Randomization?
That is great. Loved every bit of it.

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Bronystories gave me the concept and some lines, then he put the outcome in my hands. I'm glad you think his faith was justified.

"If somepony tries to block, show them your cock!"

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I've gotta be me.

Aside form. from

Good job overall. Your accent issues come in to play again with Photo Finish, remember to speak your dialogue out loud to make sure it sounds right.

Well That Was Indubitably Exhilarating Work

I came into this fic expecting purely comedic porn with the usual lack of plot depth or character development. My presumption was very wrong. What I found was a rather well put together and thoroughly enjoyable story with surprisingly deep characters. I find myself very interested in this universe, and would love to read more about it, clop or otherwise.

My only issue with this, as a few others have stated before, is the rather bad accenting for Photo Finish's speach. However, as the reader, it was easy enough to work through it.

I really look forward to anything more from this AU.

HAHA, how you write Photo Finish´s sentences is great. This half-german-half-english is hilarious

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There's a sequel now.

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Ah, sexual innuendoes

Hah, that was surprisingly nice Loved the dynamic with Iron Will and Fluttershy.

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Throughout the process that was my sole focus, the characters.

Well, that story was unexpectedly good!

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Thank you kindly!

See, now all we need is some Rarity/Dog scenes... Wonderful little fic here!

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Read the sequel, it opens with Raridog action. And my next Interspecies Request story is a Rarity/Diamond Dog gang bang story. I like Dog and Pony sex.

4129631 Schweet. Not sure which story that is... Perhaps now that you can mark stories as sequels here, maybe you could lead a clop-happy mare the right direction...?

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It's a pain, mostly because I not only need to borrow a family member's wifi, BUT since my own laptop is pretty slow I need to borrow their computer to do anything around here.

The title, in any case, is "Iron Will vs. the Penile Code."

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That was Bronystories. He did some of the lines but left the majority to me.

I was looking for some Iron Will stories when I ran across this, and decided to read this in a moment of "Ah what the hell, how bad could it be. Lets see this thing". And I found myself pleasantly surprised. For a story about a porn shoot its surprisingly sweet and funny. The characters and their dialogue feel natural. One would expect them to feel forced in such a setting. It was pretty entertaining and showed a lot of character. I'll admit judging from the title itself I expected to find just mindless clop. I'm happy to be proven wrong.

Awww thank you. I like to try and make my clop a cut above.

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