Wow... a clopfic like this, makes me want to write a sad fic about Iron Will. Hmm... Clopfics, what have you done to me!? Anyways, good fic. It's not rushed on sex. Find more feels than arousement, since, there's still no kinky actions. Would like to read more.
D'aawwww, this is so sweet~ <3 Like the sweetest Iron Will fic out there. And i love how he and Shy interacts with each other. But what i really like are how good you are with capturing the characterisation like Iron to be shy and nervous about having sex on camera with a pony or Shy being a porn veteran yet still sweet, adorable and shy in public. Somehow i hope those two won´t have sex only for the porn movie but also outside of the studio, just the two of them, tender, sweet love just like Shy wants to have with somepony or someone who really cares about her and is not interested in "breaking teh cutie/shake that wallflower" etc.
And given Iron Will´s talent in speechs and rehtoric i expect him to make awesome lines which will make the porn vid besides the great sex a huge sell and so starts his porn career.
2300041 Thanks for reminding me why I hate the featured box, asshole. And in case anyone was wondering, I'm looking for Regi. And he's not here. Aww...
well, this is still flying somewhere high on the 'strange, but interesting' scale
"Sometimes, we just take a step back and think 'what the hell are we doing?'" -Adam Savage (I went there and reading this is one of those moments)
Simply because of the nightmare poon poster in the last chapter, I assumed the mane 6 were porn stars. With the mentioning of Rarity, I'm thinking I may be correct. I wonder what Twilight loves the most?
This has to be the most passionate clopfic I have ever read in my entire life, a 100/10, you dserve every single number, I'm crying Gods, I'm crying......you did so well it's impossible to dislike in the slightest, I need more, for the love of the Gods, I need more
2305856 Even if I don't like the clop, you have no idea how long I been waiting to read a Fluttershy/Iron Will romance so I'm not leaving either way bro, you have my full support
What an insane alternate universe this is. Keep it up, good sir. Can't say I appreciate getting IW's wangus beef described in such detail, but you've got talent for writing characters.
It's a clop fic. By definition I have to describe his 'wangus beef' in such detail. But I'm glad you like the characters. I realize that is usually my strong suit.
Good Lord. I had some trepidation at first, but somehow you really made this work. Now I want a full AU of Mane 6 pornstars and the background characters!
'Heart' and 'good storytelling' are two of my biggest stocks-in-trade. Sex is one of my weaker points but BronyStories showed a confidence in me and I went at it with all my heart and soul.
I wondered how long it would take for someone to write a clopfic with him using that line.
2301089 it's about ponies, and the comment I replied to mentioned engineers
2302485 derpibooru.org/7646?scope=scpe89f66fa7f9280cc7be89283a0e8e0d3f36f00149
This is incredible, keep up the great work!
FAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAP
Link to the original picture?
2302572 getting paid for fucking hot girls... what I am waiting?
The cover picture.......Made me comment.
I have no comment on it though.
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My work here is done. Except for the sex.
I amenjoying this story and concept a little bit too much. I LIKE IT.
Wow... a clopfic like this, makes me want to write a sad fic about Iron Will. Hmm...
Clopfics, what have you done to me!?
Anyways, good fic. It's not rushed on sex. Find more feels than arousement, since, there's still no kinky actions. Would like to read more.
I don't even want to know what's going on in the cover art.
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Well, it looks like they're talking about the birds and the bees.
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http://derpy.me/dQgbf [NSFW]
There. *gets banned*
D'aawwww, this is so sweet~ <3
Like the sweetest Iron Will fic out there. And i love how he and Shy interacts with each other. But what i really like are how good you are with capturing the characterisation like Iron to be shy and nervous about having sex on camera with a pony or Shy being a porn veteran yet still sweet, adorable and shy in public.
Somehow i hope those two won´t have sex only for the porn movie but also outside of the studio, just the two of them, tender, sweet love just like Shy wants to have with somepony or someone who really cares about her and is not interested in "breaking teh cutie/shake that wallflower" etc.
And given Iron Will´s talent in speechs and rehtoric i expect him to make awesome lines which will make the porn vid besides the great sex a huge sell and so starts his porn career.
2300041 Thanks for reminding me why I hate the featured box, asshole.
And in case anyone was wondering, I'm looking for Regi.
And he's not here. Aww...
hey can I get a link to an uncropped version of the cover pic?
2304573 check the comments.
well, this is still flying somewhere high on the 'strange, but interesting' scale
"Sometimes, we just take a step back and think 'what the hell are we doing?'"
-Adam Savage (I went there and reading this is one of those moments)
Simply because of the nightmare poon poster in the last chapter, I assumed the mane 6 were porn stars. With the mentioning of Rarity, I'm thinking I may be correct. I wonder what Twilight loves the most?
Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag.
This has to be the most passionate clopfic I have ever read in my entire life, a 100/10, you dserve every single number, I'm crying Gods, I'm crying......you did so well it's impossible to dislike in the slightest, I need more, for the love of the Gods, I need more
2304129 LOVE IT
2304555 WHAT THE BUCK, CLOPPLE?!
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Yeah. Except for the goddamn sex.
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I only hope you retain this view when I get to the actual sex.
2305856 Even if I don't like the clop, you have no idea how long I been waiting to read a Fluttershy/Iron Will romance so I'm not leaving either way bro, you have my full support
What an insane alternate universe this is.
Keep it up, good sir. Can't say I appreciate getting IW's wangus beef described in such detail, but you've got talent for writing characters.
this was awesome
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It's a clop fic. By definition I have to describe his 'wangus beef' in such detail. But I'm glad you like the characters. I realize that is usually my strong suit.
I think this is going to be an Ironshy romance fic somewhere along the lines. Is this what you're going to plan, Gabriel?
That cover image...I can't even
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Honestly, I think it's an IronShy romance fic right now. Just with awkwardness and porn.
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PRON PRON PRON
2307883 That makes total sense!
Not sure to favorite, or stop reading...
Well new fan right here
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That you continue to read humbles and amazes me. Your vote of confidence is heartening.
EMOTIONAL FAP
Picture get a thumbs up.
Good Lord. I had some trepidation at first, but somehow you really made this work. Now I want a full AU of Mane 6 pornstars and the background characters!
All of my hugs!
You know...I keep thinking I've seen all of the strange directions fanfiction can go...And then I read something like this.
It's brilliant. Thank you for doing this.
This is engaging and builds an interesting narrative. This is not just some quick clop-fic.
This how you tell a story.
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This comment... this is why I do what I do. To tell a story that reaches out and engages with the readers.
>You need to know the elements of a good on-camera orgasm.
And that's where I began laughing uncontrollably!
I'm monitoring this fic.
Oh, man. Update soon so I can both fap and d'aaaaw at the same time.
This, people, this is how you do clopfics!
A clopfic with heart and good story telling. Definitely reading this one to the end, nicely done.
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'Heart' and 'good storytelling' are two of my biggest stocks-in-trade. Sex is one of my weaker points but BronyStories showed a confidence in me and I went at it with all my heart and soul.
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I believe once I finally get to the last parts you will indeed fap and d'aww. Maybe even think deeply.
2322356 Seems like it worked out well. If done right, the genres can go hand in hand. Or in this case; hoof in hoof.