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TonicPlotter


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You've only lived in Equestria for a month now. You made a couple of friends, but mostly kept to yourself. That is, until you have a wild night of binge drinking at a party and wake up in bed with Lyra Heartstrings! Wacky hijinks ensue!

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Comments ( 45 )

:rainbowlaugh: Oh, this is good. Thanks man, this made my night.

Excellent. A work of art. :pinkiehappy:

IN THE LOLS! :flutterrage:

Hey Human, Lyra is sapient. It's only xenophilia.

Good story none the less.

this made me laugh so hard :rainbowlaugh:

Full speed in the lolz good sir.
And the correct answer in the end would have been: okay see you later i'm going to hang myself or jump off a cliff or something.

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Probably. It was basically a parody of all those cheesy self-insert romance fics.

2183772 propably.... care to elaborate?

oh and i forgot to tell you, it's very well written, do you have a proofreader or editor? because if you don't i'm impressed by the lack of mistakes:pinkiehappy:

And this is another example why I just randomly browse some stories here. Well done chap. :twilightsmile:

Clever. I like it.

First time that i read a self -insert story... I liked it

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What I mean, is I probably won't write another self-insert fic. This was more of a joke that came to mind than anything. But then again, I kind of have another idea involving Octavia, but I don't know if I could flesh it out into a full story without forcing it. I could always try, I guess.

Oh, and I do my own proof-reading. My trick is to read it out loud in silly voices:derpytongue2:. No, seriously. You'll find almost every error if you do that.

2186618 well, don't fix it if it ain't broken:pinkiehappy:

i'd love that octavia fic, she's one of my favourite background ponies.

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I'll see if I can fic it. It'll probably be terrible, but what have I got to lose except having to endure pissy comments?:rainbowkiss:

That was hilarious, you sir would make a great comedian:rainbowwild:

that was mean... and freaking hilarious...

Thought I was in for a steamy read, instead I end up chocking on my own spit laughing. Well played. :rainbowlaugh:

Thumbing this up and favoriting. I reread this 3 times because it was hilarious and I somehow just had the time. :pinkiesmile:
I give this 5/5 Applejacks

:ajbemused::ajsleepy::ajsmug::applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

L O FUCKING L!! :trollestia:

That made my day. :rainbowlaugh:

I trolled myself :moustache::moustache::moustache:

Geez, not so loud, Twinkle Toes. My head is pounding enough already.” She said, holding a hoof to her forehead as she spoke. You cringed when she called you that. You hated it when she called you that, and she was well aware. She had slapped you with that stupid nickname the day she met you, and if she wasn’t your best friend, you definitely wouldn’t put up with it.

I SEE AN AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER REFERENCE :trixieshiftright::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

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Guilty as charged.

neat



stay classy :moustache:

Well this was fun!

2181249 Oh god....that profile pic......why.......:rainbowderp:

5569117 i'm with ya __Jake101__ thats just wrong

Awww~

That was adorable

Comment posted by nullvariable deleted Nov 4th, 2016

2186618 Your proofreading advice is awesome. I never would have thought of it,but it makes so much sense. Your brain processes visual and auditory input differently, and what you might overlook in one, you can catch in another. Doing silly voices forces you to pay closer attention as well.

Thanks for the tip, and the story :twilightsmile:

2nd person? Hm to bad. Doesn't work for me.

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oh gods that profile picture. I know this is like 5 years later but lmao

This one is good! :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

P. S. TVTropes got me here.

Short but sweet hahaha

Seriously, the actitute of Lyra in Fan fics is always pure gold :yay:

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