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My only problem with it, is that it's short. I want to read more! :raritydespair:

But really though, keep up the good work :yay:

this story is interesting but short, hope the next chapter is a bit longer.:raritywink:
anyways well done, makes me want to read more. :twilightsmile:

Shame, seems like you could have made a really great, extensive story from this, (not that this isn't amazing) you're a talented writer.
Maybe a prequel to go in-depth about those weeks where rainbow was hostile, then some of their early dating. Just suggestions, honestly, you Dont need to do anything if you Dont want

You win my Spikes.

This is every Human x Dashie fic in a nutshell.

That's a reeeealllly good nutshell, then.
For it's length, it's got a really smooth feel to it.
Kudos to Jayce. Good snippit. :twilightsmile:

:heart::yay::pinkiehappy: My reaction to this story. SO CUTE :D

Your mind is still little blank

Needs to be Your mind is still a little blank.

my reaction:
*heart explodes and then implodes*

I take a few days off to spend time with my friends and family, and I come back to get all of these amazing comments on my story! My ego is getting ginourmous right about now... :pinkiehappy:

Really though, I appreciate all of the support. Glad you enjoyed the story! :heart:

1894009 I fixed it. Thanks for the catch! :pinkiesmile:

Mustacho approves of this story and message:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

this is a great story! i like where its going aswell. keep up the great work!

FIMfiction needs more one shots like this.<3
They make school much more bearable :twilightsmile:

hey! this story deserves my 1000th


So much d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ( for me atleast ) :rainbowkiss:

This isn't Anon in Equestria. I suggest you read the blog post. Anon in Equestria is ANON in Equestria. Just because you have an unnamed human, that doesn't count as Anonymous.

I applaud you good sir. This was a heartwarming tale, and I truly implore for you to write more in the near future!

Alright, fancy talk aside, you really did do a great job.:pinkiehappy:

very cute, i always enjoy stories like these :twilightsmile:

Sorry, but I just can't feel the romance here. A few phrases in two paragraphs don't allow me to construct an enamored Rainbow.



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