• Published 31st Dec 2012
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A Morning of Rainbow - Jayce



You spend a morning with the very unlikely love of your life, Rainbow Dash.

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A Morning of Rainbow

A Morning of Rainbow


Your mind is still a little blank, as it normally is when you wake up. A month or two ago, you would've half expected your ALARMingly loud alarm clock (you facepalm yourself for the bad pun) to wake you up, but you've learned to stop expecting it. You still wonder if you're dreaming sometimes, looking around it's hard to believe otherwise (considering you're sleeping on a cloud bed in a town filled with colorful and magical talking ponies), but as you pinch yourself, you convince yourself for one-millionth time that it's all real. You're inside a roman-designed cloud mansion with the love of your life, Rainbow Dash, the element of loyalty and saviour of Equestria, (also a soon-to-be member of the Wonderbolts). If you had told yourself a month or so ago that you'd be courting a multicoloured pegasus that shot rainbows from its flank whenever it flew really fast, you'd have slapped yourself for being on the heaviest of hallucinogenic drugs. Yet here you are, and you feel a sudden surge of happiness emanate from your chest when you realize that you wouldn't have it any other way.

You had never been one of the people to wake early, in fact, you were able to sleep most of the day away if no one interrupted you, but you always seemed to wake up faster than Rainbow and you very much liked this. While you could never dislike Rainbow, her constant brash and confident attitude often finds ways to annoy you. You feel like it stops her from really being able to get intimate with you, and it sometimes makes you question whether or not she really likes you. However, the combination of times you caught her glancing at you when she thought you weren't looking, and moments like these put any of those doubts to rest.

She's still asleep, as she most likely will be for the next hour or so. Her fore-hooves are looped tightly around your chest, holding onto you as if she never wanted to let you go. Her hind-legs and tail found their way to one of your legs and are snuggly resting themselves there. Her chest is moving softly up and down against your torso, while her warm breath leaves her nostrils and makes it's way to your neck. A small smile begins to form on your face as you think about how perfect Rainbow's hair is. It is never out of place. Hours on end of flying at supersonic speeds has made her hair rather resilient. It's a good thing too, her hair would look really garish if it was tangled and entwined all over the place.

It's pretty funny actually, the day that you sort of 'popped' into existence here, Rainbow was the one that was most clearly not trusting of you. She was also the one that took the longest to win over, out of some inane fear that you would potentially be a threat to her friends. One time in particular, Pinkie had thrown you a 'Welcome Party' and Rainbow had spent the entire time glaring at you, waiting for just one mistake to pounce on you (which never came, of course). After the initial few weeks of suspicion however, she rapidly became one of your closest friends, and you two became inseperable. You two would spend all day together, doing activities ranging from watching her practice her flying moves, to playing with some of your human technology, to endlessly pranking other ponies. One day after hours of one of your many pranking sessions, she timidly started asking you questions about some of the other ponies here, mainly whether or not you planned on actually being with one of them. You thought very carefully before finally responding with a simple "Yes." She got a very big, and flushed smile on her face before saying "Good" and moving forward to plant a tiny kiss on your lips.

Things skyrocketed from there. It wasn't long after that when you started pronouncing your love for each other (well mainly in private, didn't want to embarrass her). Finally after long months of waiting, she timidly asked you to move into her sky mansion with her. The embarrased and almost scared look on her face when she asked you had a strange way of breaking your heart. Her normal, daredevil attitude in abeyance for the second time since you had met her, replaced by some kind of terrifying fear of loneliness in her eyes. You said yes almost faster than your mouth could move, to which she pulled you aside (away from any prying eyes of the public) and rewarded you with the biggest bear hug she could muster, followed by a deep kiss.

So now here you are. The sudden history lesson makes you wonder about your parents, well, your entire family actually. Would your parents be okay with this? Would your siblings still be willing to call you their blood relative if they found out that you were in love with a pony? While there were multiple sentient races here in Equestria, there weren't any other races back on Earth, and if you ever did go back you really didn't want to get banned from all of the local petting zoos. That's not even considering the-

You hear a small contented sigh leave Rainbow's lips and you break out of your daydreaming (morning dreaming?) to feel Rainbow cuddle closer to you. You feel a large grin grace your face when you suddenly realize that you don't really care what they think. You wouldn't trade her for the world. You lightly push some of her crimson-tinted hair out of your face and give her a light kiss on the forehead. She gets a tiny smile on her face and you pull her closer before drifting back into blissful slumber. This was how practically all of your mornings have gone lately, and you wouldn't have it any other way.

Author's Note:

Thanks for reading my very first story ever! I really hope you liked it, I spent waaayy too much time trying to think of a good story to write and I just finally sat down and did it. I would really appreciate constructive criticism so that I can get better. Thanks again for reading!

Comments ( 24 )

My only problem with it, is that it's short. I want to read more! :raritydespair:

But really though, keep up the good work :yay:

this story is interesting but short, hope the next chapter is a bit longer.:raritywink:
anyways well done, makes me want to read more. :twilightsmile:

Shame, seems like you could have made a really great, extensive story from this, (not that this isn't amazing) you're a talented writer.
Maybe a prequel to go in-depth about those weeks where rainbow was hostile, then some of their early dating. Just suggestions, honestly, you Dont need to do anything if you Dont want

You win my Spikes.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

This is every Human x Dashie fic in a nutshell.

1881286
That's a reeeealllly good nutshell, then.
For it's length, it's got a really smooth feel to it.
Kudos to Jayce. Good snippit. :twilightsmile:

:heart::yay::pinkiehappy: My reaction to this story. SO CUTE :D

Your mind is still little blank

Needs to be Your mind is still a little blank.

my reaction:
*heart explodes and then implodes*

I take a few days off to spend time with my friends and family, and I come back to get all of these amazing comments on my story! My ego is getting ginourmous right about now... :pinkiehappy:

Really though, I appreciate all of the support. Glad you enjoyed the story! :heart:

1894009 I fixed it. Thanks for the catch! :pinkiesmile:

Mustacho approves of this story and message:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

this is a great story! i like where its going aswell. keep up the great work!

FIMfiction needs more one shots like this.<3
They make school much more bearable :twilightsmile:

hey! this story deserves my 1000th

followin'

So much d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ( for me atleast ) :rainbowkiss:

This isn't Anon in Equestria. I suggest you read the blog post. Anon in Equestria is ANON in Equestria. Just because you have an unnamed human, that doesn't count as Anonymous.

very cute, i always enjoy stories like these :twilightsmile:

Sorry, but I just can't feel the romance here. A few phrases in two paragraphs don't allow me to construct an enamored Rainbow.

cute



stayclassy:moustache:

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