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Awww,man dude I just...Just laugh at your clop (part).
In one good buckong reasonscissor.
You made my night (happy).
Anyway I enjoy the chapter.
But,to be honest,It sort of...feel like you don't really put clop.
But hey its your story do whatever you want.,
...and Luna backhoofs Celestia across the face. End of chapter. Seriously, that was harsh
...and this is half of why I love Lunashy. The other half is that Fluttershy would see how lonely and distant Luna is and want to comfort her (not necessarily through sex)
Awesome chapter
I didn't find anything major wrong with this chapter except where you again forget to capitalize the first word when a character starts to speak,
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Yeah I know, Celly was being harsh, but she was concerned that Luna was doing something stupid, you have to remember she has the safety of the nation to be worried about along with her responsibilities as the big sister.
I have a theory.
If you write more chapters then I will be happier because there are more chapters.
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So I take it you liked the chapter?
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I'm having a hard time understanding the what your saying with the last two sentences?
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I... think he's complaining about the lack of clop so far in the story... I could be wrong though.
A fine update, Fuedra. Normally, i'm not one for Lunashy, but I'm liking this so far.
You know what,I will just copy and paste somepony comment:
"Amazing chapter."
Short but whatever.
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oh I think we can be sure of that, they do own several...."shops" as it were, if you get my meaning.
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she does not yet know of the Society, the society and the nobles have kind of a jaded past, which will be explained latter by Fluttershy.
Well as far as i have readen this story its going prety well
Lunashy, hm thats new i need to write this somvere
About the story so far so amazing.
Seemed a bit sudden that Luna suddenly wants to date Fluttershy, unless there's a history there you'll expand on later this seemed kind of fast.
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I will be starting work on that again soon, I just got other stories I am juggling, I hate putting stories on Hiatus, cause inevitably I end up forgetting all my Ideas for them and then cant work on them any more. So as long as I keep them set to incomplete, they will stay fresh in my mind and their for unlikely to fade, even if it takes me a while to update.
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I thought that was covered in the last chapter, when Celestia asked how she felt about her...hm, guess I wasn't clear enough.
http://z0r.de/4959
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Awww,that was so nice
I like this chapter.
I'll admit... this story has me rather intrigued. If only for the idea of "tattoo magic" (the clop could stand to see improvement, but only so much as attention to explaining detail... which can be difficult for authors to get past due to social stigmas regarding such things... but I digress) and as I'm a fan of LunaShy, I shall watch this tale with rapt attention.
I NEED MORE
Also do you thing you could come up with what the wing tattoos would look like?
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Already got a picture that this is based off of, I will show it once Flutters tattoo's are finished.
There was a delay?
That was a nice chapter.
Were, would Luna learn about the modern day version of courting?
I mean really?From FlutterShy,that sex shop or a book.
Does Luna know Tia uses Sunbeam as a pseudonym? And likewise does Celestia know about whatever Luna uses as a disguise name? I'd assume so or else any double date will be awkward and full of accusations of cheating...
Anyways! Backstory, Flutters knows "you" somehow, and final tattoo time!
P.S. protip for the future, Quiet is a command to calm down/shut up; Quite usually implies understanding when used as an exclamation, or to show that withing the discussed topic, whatever is being discussed is or fair significance.
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Yes, they know about each others disguises, they have to get out for normal sisterly time somehow.
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From Flutters of course.
I can't wait to see the pic of flutters tattoo
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Oh another comment, this is the same little shop that was in Teacher No More, and also considering Fluttershy's profession, it should be easy to assume how she knows my OC Fuedra.
Awww that was so short but yet so...(Its nice...yeah its nice.
Will there be funny moments of Luna teaching FlutterShy?
How was your night?
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Tiring
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As to lesson moments, yes an no, their will be funny ones, but once they find out which emotion Fluttershy's magic is most in tune with, the situations may get a little...heated.
3297812 YAY MORE LOVE
Is it ok if I'm scard of fluttershy now!?!
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Dont worry...well ok worry, because basically I just gave Flutters rage an upgrade.
3303862 I'm still scard I need a hug
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I'll give you a hug.
3307536 *hugs*
Oh shit that tattoo looks awesome it makes me wanna get my body tattooed to look like that :D
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no you are correct, and it will be funny when the inevitable double date roles around.
3335164 oh I think you will, especially seeing as how they wont be going as sisters.
Oh I can't wait Fuedra. Let the fun continue. Also I have a gift for you. it is all my hearts.
The max I can give for such a good story.
matting=mating, allies=alias.
I know you probably put that this in here hoping someone would twig on it, so I'll take the bait:
Firstly, the idea of a pony eating meat doesn't bother me at all. At first, though, the idea of Fluttershy eating meat was just wrong. But then you tried to explain/justify yourself... fair enough. At least you tried.
Your justification is flimsy however. It basically amounts to "Fish are dumb, so I can eat them" and good Pegasus diet. My problem is that Fluttershy is obviously a poor flier and thus would lead to the conclusion that she probably doesn't (or extremely rarely) eat(s) fish (or do anything else normal for a pegasus for that matter). Basically it feels like you're saying Fluttershy can eat fish but almost never does, and I'm left wondering why.
At first I thought it was because of the expense, but then she has this companion gig plus whatever she makes from doing whatever it is she does with the animals in Ponyville, so it doesn't sound like money is all that tight for her.
All in all, the fish thing is really perplexing, but otherwise a good chapter
Ah, this chapter is nicely funny.
THE REALLY MOST IMPORTANT PART OF
THE CHAPTER IS...WHO IS SNOW'S WIFE!!!
MoonBeam you say...
I didn't listen to the song...To be honest music in stories throw me off.
But, I do"regret" it rarely
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Actually we know Fluttershy is a good flyer from the events of...ok I cant remember the episode name, but it was the one with the big twister. Also I wasn't putting this in to trigger anything, honestly it was mainly for a bit of world building on what goes into a normal pegasus's diet, and from everything I know a lot of birds eat fish or some other form of animal protein to survive, so I thought it would be an interesting bit of world building to add that need for animal protein to pegasi.
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two hints, she is a unicorn, and she lives in Ponyville.
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That same episode (Hurricane Fluttershy) is one of my lynchpins in the theory that Flutters is a horrible flier; she is ridiculed for her poor wing-power/flight skills (i.e. "Fluttershy! Fluttershy can hardly fly!") and even at the end, her wing power is still way less than the average pegasus. Sure it showcases FS's personal best but that's still pretty low by comparison, even if it was the slight nudge needed for the ponies to send the water up to Cloudsdale
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to that I will agree, as to the other not, I am afraid we will have to agree to disagree.
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Its a play of the name of the Leviathan gunship hybrid Talyn from the show Farscape, and in my minds eye he even has the same color scheme.
3339449Hummm Rarity,Colgate,Twilight,Trixie,Amethyst Star,Lyra
I'm poop out.
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Another hint, she has long legs, and shares the same color pallet as sapphire shores.