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Futile Task


I'm just a simple writer sharing his hobby with the world, hope you all enjoy.

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Well...I'm hook again in this other story.:twilightsmile:
Damn!That mare!

LOL,Just add an (L) and out the (R):eeyup:

I could see a lot a bonding time with Goreright?

Nive story keep em coming

Did good adding in the bat pony species

Also fuedra can you make me a cover art I can find any and I can't make one thanks to my horrible drawing skills so if you could that would be a treat

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not my cover art, I am not that good a artist, the cover art is temporary till I can find or make better.

Well that was a bit of a rush...:eeyup:

So are they gonna hunt together somewhere soon
In...what,later chapters?:eeyup:

So...Shadowmere...Did you got that name in...What Skyrim
or your own mind?:eeyup:

nice but question did you make up this this stuff about bat ponys or did you get it from something else:rainbowhuh:

2 batponys or I guess 1 bat pony and a bat pony alicorn hybreed in heat plus a alicorn twilight doesn't seem very safe for twi

man having sex 10 days in a row that is tiring

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You'd be right, but she is more in danger from Death Petal then from Fuedal.

so much stuff happened in this chapter I had to read it 3 times to full under stand it but was defenitly worth it
:heart::twilightsmile:

couldn't help but burst out laughing when Fuedal said " Now are we going to do this or what?” just because I been following this story and it really doesn't seem Fuedal would be the very eager type

but other than that still loved it:twilightsmile:

I have a small question. It's probably a stupid one, but is his name pronounced Few-dal, or fway-dal? Cause the way it's spelled makes me think Fway-dal...

Wow, I can't help but hope those two will someday end up spending time with Luna for more than just sex... or study. And no, I don't mean sex-study...

I enjoy the story...Uh sorry chapter of the story

Whoa,whoa What the shit man...This is loony.:pinkiecrazy:

Man,thank the sisters that's done.:eeyup:

Really,a big bed dude...Where did he get the bits?

But what about dear FlutterShy:fluttercry:?

I enjoyed it.

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Dear Fluttershy shall be addressed in the next chapter.

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Also you have to remember this guy is Luna's personal student, plus their is that title of declared, it comes with a hefty pay check.

:twilightsmile: I'm really enjoying this story. I found it yesterday and I can't stop waiting for more. Looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work.

Also, Do you know where I might be able to find stories similar to this one that contain Bat Ponies? Is there a good group/site/community that you can point me towards?

Thanks,
~Tschloken~

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I sadly do not know of any groups that specifically focus on bat ponies, but I could look around, as for stories, I can only really think of one at the moment, its called A Tryst At Midnight, which is pretty good.

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I thank thee for thou help.

dude I don't know what the hell or how to explain what is going on in my mind right now:applejackunsure: im confused
I don't know weather to be super excited because I've always vision fluttershy be viliont somehow:raritystarry:
or to be sort of mad or sad because flutters is my fav of the main 6 and I don't wanna see her as something different :fluttercry:
but ill probly get over it once you relase the update because I've never been disappointed by you're writing I know the next chapter is goanna be amazing either way I'm excited for it:pinkiehappy:

p.s. sorry for the long comment

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I love long comments, and I can understand your slight anger, I am basically taking what is to be considered a kind loving character and giving her this sort of predator that surfaced when she was young. This will come up latter as Flutters is going to become a important character to the story along with Luna.

Comment posted by Schwarzwald deleted Jul 2nd, 2013

AHHHH...My heart burn for the hunt ...And the twist about the potion (clever.)

This story is pretty sweet.The way you put Shy (smart.):pinkiehappy:

This comment will make you smile.:pinkiehappy:

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I know this is late, but I am guessing it was the blood that freaked you out?

Okay...Okay...That was a bit crazy. I thought FlutterShy would be clumsy at it but...
Yeah,that was:pinkiesick:And I was hungry.:flutterrage:

Where you happy when the making this story?:moustache:

Can at least tell me (us) what what type of kill was it
A bear
A Deer
or a Bunny(Angel)

Overall the story is really fun to read twice.

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Creepily enough, I'm usually very happy when writing chapters for this story.:pinkiecrazy:

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Oh as to the kill, it was a deer, Angle Bunny will be addressed latter...he is in for a rude awakening about who is head of household.

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like it yes also at a loss for word at what it actualy is just im lost with how I feel about I don't know maby a mix about scared amazed awestruck the bets wors to describe how I feel twords it are just wo

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yes that good and probly even more just wo

Fuedra i would like to point out(cause i guess your main launguage is not english) that it is spelled herd not heard is the word hear if it had been heard(used the word) a while ago.

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Actually my main language is English, I just get my words confused sometimes, no biggie though, I'll fix them when I get the time

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