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Tavi Scratch


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Unleash the OC's! Nice to see you back here! I guess we have some good times ahead! :heart:

Are you going to ask for OCs from us? Because I'd be happy to provide a few.

4038672 Sorry, I'm not looking for OC. I have a roleplaying site and their OC's will be in this. I promised some of them.

So, a story that's going to include a bunch of bad OCs and bad characterization (seriously? What's up with sociopath Snips and Snails? :rainbowhuh:)? Not only that, but a cliché, uninspired setting and contrived events forcing the story to continue (again, what's up with sociopath Snips and Snails? :rainbowhuh:)?

Yeah, if I didn't already feel like down voting this for the badly written sociopath characters, then something later on probably would have led to the same feeling.

Also, what's up with sociopath snips and snails? :rainbowhuh:

4039981 Eh. Honestly its boys being boys. Most times I can think about it most boys end up torturing animals. As for some of the lines sniips says.. He doesn't know what they really mean. As for bad grammar.. *shrug* Idgaf. I just didn't have time to ask my editor to look over it. Now uninspiring setting? The heck you think this is going to just be in school? Heavens no. I'm more capable then that.

4043000 *Rubs head embarrassed.* When I published this.. I just wanted to get it out so I didn't even see if someone would look over my grammar. Thank you, I didn't notice that when I was typing it.

So far so good. :ajsmug:
Will be keeping taps on this story, looking forward to see what kind of drama you will imply in this story. :raritywink:

4071816 I assure you if my characters allow it. This will be drama filled as for what will bring it up? I don't know I try to let them write themselves.

When is the next chapter comeing out:ajsmug:

4149483 When I have acess to a computer

Jesus man:twilightangry2: me getting impatient

4340400 I've rewritten it multiple times. It keeps sucking. I'm just trying to make it right.

4345212 I'll have you know that I am 900 words in on the next chapter of this fic which will be oh so very longer. Though while I am trying to finish this chapter tonight (My aim being 1500 words as I'm steadily getting back to writing) I can not promise it will happen. Also I work at nights Thursday thru Saturday, which is a problem because I use night time to write. I thought I should let the most anxious fan know. ^-^ Now back to writing.

PS. This chapter is mainly filler, and for that I apologize.

Ok, I'm keeping an eye on this. It has promise.

This has potential...
Good potential.
watching and waiting.
~Wywint

4732953 Relax! I'm working on it.

4732953 Also, Sorry for appearing as a grouch. :fluttercry:

It's hard for me to write Shipfics or Romance. As I am a lonely human being when I write I slowly start to descend into depression. I begin questioning everything I do and what I have done in my relationships and well.. I just end up laying in bed upset and unwilling to move.

Now.. You might be asking yourself. Why in the hell do I write them then? Well.. Because I love this fandom, I truly love this ship, and it gives me hope that one day I might get lucky to find a women. Also because I'm a writer with talent who lacks in grammar.

Lastly before I attempt to write more of this. I do actually have something written for the third chapter. Unfortunately, or fortunately depending on how you look at it. This chapter will likely not be expected and may or may not have to do with this ship. I plan to make this story a long one, not always focusing on Flutterdash. That being said there is a quote that I wish to use from a web site I roleplay on. When I'm done with this story it "won't just have ships. It will have armadas."

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Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad others like my story. :rainbowkiss:

Though sorry for being a slow writer, I can't do it as often as I'd like. Refer to the post under this.

*smiles happily as I reread the first and then the newest one* I have always loved you're stories Vi~ :heart::heart: this one chapter was great

Wait what no comments well this is new, but hey FIRST COMMENT!!!




I'm so sorry!

Ehhhhh it okay........so far so good tho

I would have probably killed them

So do you think you will ever continue this ?
Imo it has really big potential

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