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super3rainbow1


A reader and writer, but mostly a reader. I enjoy writing, shipping, and long walks on the beach.

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Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have been happily married for about two months. When Fluttershy believes that they are ready to start to their own family, Rainbow Dash reluctantly goes along with it eventually. However, they find their relationship strained and tested under the new conditions.

Also contains RariJack. Rated teen as it does contain some adult themes.

Cancelled due to a change of mind. Story to be replaced but the original will be on gdocs at some point.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 158 )

Well... this is akward. I was going to have a fanfic where Applejack and Rainbow DAsh are married and the topic of a foal is discussed. It's not going to be this light hearted, I can tell you that much. I just hope that when it comes out people don't accuse me of not trying to be original.

Anyway, I liked this chapter. Sets up the setting, the situation, and the characters really do come off as a couple. RD's fears of being the birth mother is very realistic and I'm glad you at least doing sperm donation instead of some magical excuse. Personally, I would have done adoption like I plan to do, but either way this is cool.

Hope to see more.

I haven't read it, but I will; the topic is wonderful.

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Nah, I don't think that's something you have to be worried about. :twilightsmile:

Thanks! I can't gaurantee that they will use sperm donation. I'm a little split here :applejackunsure:
Honestly, the idea of their foal being the product of both their DNA sounds cute.

Adoption would be cuter :rainbowkiss:

:pinkiehappy: A new FlutterDash fic! Yay!! :rainbowkiss::yay:

So this is a very interesting setup so far. Rainbow and Fluttershy are married, and have to go through the trials of starting a family. (Shoot, I plan to do this one day! But that's all right X3 We can all bring our own ideas to the plotline) This is very intriguing so far!

I don't know about you, but I definitely like the idea of them being able to combine their DNA like that. But if you went with a sperm donor, that's definitely fine too. Whatever works best for you. I know they'll love their baby no matter what. :twilightsmile:

Pretty good start! I look forward to what's next. :raritystarry:

This is such a good story I made a second account just so I could fave it twice (my other account is Rainbow87dash :rainbowkiss: I'm currently trolling my followers)

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You have your own unique approach. I'm sure that you could pull it off. :yay:

I think it would be adorable if their foal has physical traits from both of them.

As far the story goes, I plan to include more realistic situations i.e. Rainbow Dash having to cater to her whim and Fluttershy dealing with headaches and such. There's more but that's enough detail to let out :derpytongue2:

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I was thinking about making this a Scootaloo adoption fic but I really wanted to cover pregnancy

2132137 Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Sounds interesting, really! I definitely do look forward to how this entire pregnancy process will be handled on both sides. :twilightsmile:

This was a really good chapter. I like the concerns both Fluttershy and Rainbow have over being the birth mother, and I'm glad they agreed that Fluttershy is perfectly capable of carrying a foal.

I wonder why Rainbow didn't mention the spell Twilight talked about. Next chapter perhaps?

Look forward to more. :yay:

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Thank you! :twilightsheepish:

To answer that question: Yes!

Love it! Dash and Fluttershy are so sweet together, and your mix of Dash's roughness with Fluttershy's softness works really well. I've also never seen ponies dealing with pre-parenthood before, and I'm finding your take on it really interesting.

One possibility that occurred to me: if neither Fluttershy or Dash are willing to carry a foal themselves, they could always ask another of the Mane Six to accept their genetic material and carry the child for them. I suspect you're not going down that route because that would make it a different kind of story, but I was intrigued by the possibility nonetheless. Applejack was my first thought, as she's the strongest and would be most able to handle the stress of childbirth, but Rarity makes the most sense - if anyone would do such a thing for a friend, it would be the Element of Generosity.

Anyway, nice start, looking forward to more! This is really cute!

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I forgot about that one. True enough, I wouldn't go down that road now. It really would change things up.

Thanks! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Delicious deleted Feb 19th, 2013

Sorry for the long wait! My computer was messed up and I had to make the majority of this chapter on a different computer. To make things worse, I had two papers for college to write.

Things are fine now. There shouldn't be any more problems :twilightsmile:

That was a really adorable chapter. I look forward to the possible horror stories that the Cakes will tell Rainbow and Fluttershy at the dinner party.

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I'm glad that it worked out then. :yay: I was aiming it to be adorable.

DAWWWWWWWWWW
more please :pinkiehappy:

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Certainly! There's much more to come! :yay:

This is getting pretty good so far

its good to read a different flutterdash story once in while
thought the romance was a little sappy but I enjoyed it nonetheless
heres a :yay: for you

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Thanks! :twilightsmile: Glad you enjoyed it!

I am interested to see where this goes! Rainbow's and Fluttershy's relationship is very loving. I am curious how this new challenge will test it. Looking forward the next chapter.:yay:

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Mm hm. They make one of the best couples :yay: :heart: :rainbowkiss:

Oh, curse that cliffhanger ending! Can't wait for the next part.

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It was purely intentional to leave readers hanging on the results :rainbowlaugh:

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Well then, mission accomplished. :moustache:

argh, curse the writers that love cliffhangers! :flutterrage:

awesome story btw. you earned a fav. :ajsmug:

2225140>>2225360 okay every single person needs to get some tnt and destoy the nearest cliff so that cliffhangers no longer exist

*starts to look after the closest cliff*

2225766 Now that's a plan I can get behind. Off to the demolition dump. :pinkiecrazy:

:flutterrage:RAGE! Way to hook, line, and sinker me! looking forward to the next one!

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Don't worry, there'll be an answer next chapter. :derpytongue2:

i hope its a yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nuuuuu. Darn you cliffhangers! :fluttercry:

The bottom part was just removed. I didn't intend on having to kill the cliffhanger but that whole part was just so rushed that it just didn't flow good with the rest of the chapter. Whatever I took out about the next day will be in the chapter after this.

Whoops sorry? :derpytongue2:

"Pinkie Pie asked Applejack and Rarity to take care of them together," Mrs. Cake said.

Well, there's an episode in itself. XD

Loving this story! Your Fluttershy and Dash have such a cute relationship. Exploring pony genetics might be interesting as well - assuming that ponies have the same kinds of chromosomes that we do, their child would have to be a filly - although of course, you don't have to abide by anyone's rules. :)

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If I ever try writing Rarijack, I know what to start with first. :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you! :twilightsmile: I might not have to abide by someone's rules, but there's the rules of genetics. Actually, I should include that concept somewhere in one of the chapters ahead. Since they are mares.. there's no chance of a Y being passed down. It'll be a filly no matter what, I think.

I rewrote this for you.

"It won't take much effect on an empty stomach, I..."

Rainbow looked at Zecora with a puzzled expression. "Yes?"

"Um, uuh... " Panic began to spread through her, desperately searching her mind for any word at all. This only seemed to earn more luzzled looks from Rainbow and Twilight.

"Are you sure you're okay Zecora, you're looking kinda pail."

"...so eat and it only take a seck. Yes, I did it!" With a solid thrust of her hoof in the air, Zecora walked off with a satisfied grin on her face. "That was close to chaos, for I could not find the proper... oh no."

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Wait.. you have me a little confused here. :rainbowderp:

Is this about the fact that I just couldn't find a rhyme for stomache? :derpytongue2:

2259458 Yes, but I thought this would be more fun.

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Okay! Good to know!

Actually, if you wouldn't mind, I'd like to use your's as a replacement. Nothing wrong with having a little comedy here and there

2259468 If you want. :twilightsmile:

Then again I see you already have.

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Well, you were offering and my rhyming skills just weren't that sharp.. :derpytongue2:

So, thank you! :yay:

Another good chapter! Something tells me poor Dash has no idea how stressful this is going to get. ^^

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

Unfortunately, not yet. After all, pregnancy can be very stressful to both sides. :fluttershysad: For now, things are easy for them.

I'm loving this story so far. Keep at it! =D

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: I'll be sure to continue

Twilight: suddenly homophobe. :facehoof: I'm sure you'll work in an explanation for that in the coming chapters. You will, won't you? :flutterrage:

So, what the heck happened in the kitchen? :applejackconfused: The last thing we heard from Applejack was, "Ah do like her but ahm not even ready for a relationship." And then we cut away to the other dinner guests, and all of a sudden Applejack and Rarity are announcing that they're in love. So yes, it is questionable. Even if Rainbow did give Applejack the "big talk" that resulted in Applejack deciding that she would give Rarity a shot, that hardly seems like it should result in Applejack and Rarity announcing their love just minutes later. I think there's a good half a chapter at least that was missing here.

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