Applejack stumbles upon Rainbow Dash while she's fitting a wedding dress for Rarity.
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Will Read Later, Will Undoubtly Love It
Live long and dash apple.
Awesome. Adorable appledash, well written. Brought a smile to my face, and the end had me laughing. Well done!
Very thoroughly well-done AJ voice! Having an out-of-place accent of my own, I've always been intrigued by 'writing how it sounds'
I enjoyed this a great deal
Especially that ending -- had me in stitches!
- OvO
I love this.
SO MUCH.
Quite liked it, and it was a good narrative voice for AJ. Only complaint was that you used "a tad bit" a touch more was needed, but otherwise absolutely fantastic.
This deserves to be featured, seriously. This is beautiful. I've not taken any real interest in anything Appledash for, oh, a year now? And just like that you write down all the angles of it that I never thought about.
(And yes, Rainbow Dash -does- look good in a dress. That said, it's gotta be a good-looking dress in it's own right - Rainbow Dash only dresses in style!).
Pffahaha! That last paagraph!
Rainbow Dash always dresses in style
Hard to pass up such nice AJ voice. Really enjoyed this one!
I totally love your AppleDash writings; they have a lot of emotion in them. Amazing!
Keep them coming 
This was adorable! And introspective Applejack isn't something I've seen too much of, especially not with such beautiful language. Awesome job!
awesome and cute
congrats on feature (without mature checked on)
Nuff said
Another wonderful story, THIS is talent.
Please keep it up.
2136090 Of course you would beat me to finding it.
@blue harvest: This was absolutely excellent in every way. Thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end. Have a like, favourite and...oh yeah, why not a follow?
Another excellent story. It's not often that a writer can make such a lack of conflict interesting, but you perfectly manage it somehow.
Heh! Well written, beautiful, love it!
AppleDash and more wingboners, fun stuff.
yes
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This should be your cover pic
This was a nice little piece that gave me warm fuzzies.
Kudos to you my friend. Keep up the great work.
2141671
what else could it be?
2147875
Yeah...
2141522 Honestly, I think it was probably just done like that because it's RD talking. Do you really expect her to know either pig latin or the word 'nix'? She probably just heard it wrong when someone else used it.
This was great.
Oh man, what I wouldn't give to be able to write just a glimpse into AJ's mind, something like this, something that brings her love for Rainbow Dash down to earth and peals it apart like a banana for all the world to see, just like this. There were so many sweet, touching moments in this, things that just made me feel like I was transported into the most intimate repository of Applejack's feelings, things like
and
I could just hear Applejack saying that, and it felt amazing.
Oh, this was brilliant, just plain utterly brilliant.
Great. Simply great.
Very nice, although a tad bit overboard on AJ's accent the content and story telling was so good that in the end... it doesn’t really bother me that much. yay,
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That was a truly wonderful story. It was elegant and poetic , a great example of how an Appledash story should be.
Excellent job
I don't know if there is one but if not I kindly DEMAND A SEQUEL ... thank you
THE ENDING THO
This little story was so elegantly and poetically written!
It was a nice take on AJ's side of their current relationship. Not to mention, amusing on RD's part with her humorous and entertaining reactions to Applejack's advances. Nicely done. You've certainly earned a 'favourite' from me! :)
However, agreeing with some of the other commentators, I too, feel Applejacks accent was a little overdone in comparison of her standards.
Other than that, a job well done. Here's a moustache for 'yo.
Welp, now I've read everything on this account. Only like, three more to go.
Well done.
Down girl!
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my .... overwhelmed...
I think I have read most of your AppleDash stories now. I must say I really love them. The way you can have romantics and seriousness and still all keep it so light hearted and enjoyable to read, its amazing ^^
SO… MUCH… FLUFF AND WEEJAJSKDKEKWLDMFJELDKFKEKEKE I LOVE IT
Wow. That last sentence is just great!
Kinda contradicts your other story, “Come Back to Bed, Sugarcube”, where both ponies agree that Applejack is the more talkative one.
Great fanfic