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Nice begin, and Clare is not only find, he is becoming more and more strong. I do hoped he will be able to see Luna soon or at least communicated with her some way, the rule said not go to the living realm, it saids nothing about communicated with them in some way. Perhaps a dream or something.
P.S: Did the Apache and her son is with Clare too? I will love to see them now being like roommates and sparing partners. Have sense considering Clare give her an honorable death, and keep his promise to help her village. It will be hilarious is now Apache has enter full lovely mother mode and treat Clare as her own son
Yeah there's going to be alot of friendships that bond together. I think the real kicker is the fact that this story hasn't even passed moderator approval yet, and there's already 8 favourites. I was like 'Well then... I better make this story good'
Because you're stories kick flank that's why you don't need moderator approval.
Yup Keep on the good work and you better not pair Luna with someone else!
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I second that, she clearly said that she will never love another after him, and as heartless as it may sound hoped she keep it
Cliffhangers be damned!
My guess is that Clare will return on the day of birth of his child.
men that was intense, in heaven exist hospitals? Or the power was so much that he kill him and when a spirit die I actually return to the world of the living, and live again? (Don't reincarnate, I mean that he literally, just fell to Equestria and live again)
"See new trigger finger fanfic"
OH SNAP
"drop everything/read the story"
Take away my fear and say that Luna stays with Clare.
Hmmm…I wonder if Chrysalis and/or Eclipse are pregnant. For some reason she is following them after all.
Oh by the way, since Clare is heaven, those that means he will have the chance to meet Celestia and Luna parents?
Dragon ball Z !
Danko has to become a main-side character!
I fuckin' love him!
Ten kinds of awesome sauce.
Men that is quite the entrance, my respect for the villains, for not grow in rage when they see Clare.
i was hopping to see Fly Dancer join them in the end. seeing her in her special double machine gun armor would have being awesome, besides I still want to see the team those 3 can make. And I bet the last thing she want is stay a second more with that elder.
By the way, did she can get in trouble if she kick him in the groin with all her might? For that matter, why don't just said what he is doing or something?
Oh and that thing he did with Clare chest…uncomfortable, very, very uncomfortable. I mean you said you image yourself as Clare…dude right that didn't make you fell awkward?
That scene with Fly dancer just "scratching" Clare, was just hilarious. I was honesty thinking that at some point Long Tail will walk next to him and ask "Mister are you going to be my new dad?"
P.S: Please, please bring Fly Dancer to the team. And also a treesome with her and Luna, think about it. Just see the picture, is promising, you know it
2100631 Yeah, I'm not really gonna say much about Sky Dancer because I do plan to have her in the story and I don't really want to spoil it. And as for Elder feeling up Clare... well let's just say it was extremely uncomfortable but at the same time it was friggin hilarious from an outsiders point of view... I think, not sure but it kind of struck me as the perverted old man that makes things hilarious, like master Roshi from Dragon Ball
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Yeah I can agree, of course he goes a little more far, with feeling guys too. He is the same hight as clare right? Or is very small like those green mans from Green Lantern?
Also, thank goddess you will put Sky Dancer in the story, you know in the first encounter I was almost sure Clare would huge her. I know they are both professional, but they also hold to much respect to one another and she is very thankful for what he did. Oh exactly how a person bride his way to heaven? Did they also have currency in heaven? Did they all have angel bucks, and always have 100 angel bucks, even when pay for something? (Sorry I had to make that joke) But seriously how did she bride her way in? Please tell me she didn't have to do a hoof job or something like that.
P.S: I have notice she not longer had that lustful vibe from the first story, you know she flirt a couple of times and all, now I see her a little like a combinations of Shy and Dash
2101928 uhm I really meant the whole bribing thing as a refrence to the fact that she was so brutal dring her life that heaven really wouldn't be too keen on letting her in but at the same time she was fighting for her village so it would have been a conflited choice. And I think the reason that she isn't so flirty anymore is because she has her son with her. As for Elder well I was figuring he'd probably be a foot shorter than Clare, When I pictured him he kind of looked like like some freaky elf like god but I usually give a bit of imagination room for the readers so they can picture what they want him to look like.
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Got it, thanks for the clarifications
He is baaack, I hoped Dakon had put the ponys in a safe place. And it was very touching seeing Sky Dancer, reveling her feeling, I do hoped that is not the last we will see about her.
By the way, I was wonder from some time, where is Discord in all this?
2103267 he died in the last story
Hé first Star Wars then Dragonball Z and now Terminator :D
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Exactly, where is he? Hell, Heaven, the void? He redeem himself and die a honor death, so I bet they allow him to keep his body, but where is he?
2103426 trust me, ahahaha "Trust me" yeah anyway. Don't worry I haven't forgotten about Discord
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Good to know, please don't forget Sky, her son and Moon. Long Tail has not spoke a word so far, did he only speak their native language?
Me likie the story.
LIGHTSABERS!
YES! 
oh god danko driving a tank
oh well
This is gonna be some cool ass shit.
007 theme music while driving a tank through the city... literally...
Men, Danko will get in so much trouble, hey I don't believed I just realize now, but why did Danko never return to earth?
When Satan died the religious side of me went WOOOOHOOOO
Danko is my new favorite character, I don't care, how baddass Clare is. This mother fucker is a drunk Russian, who drove a tank through a city, yet he stopped to pick up a endangered puppy. A+ Character right there
Drunk Russian is Awesome Russian.
He said the fatal words...
I knew it. Light sabers.
diffidently should have called it the expendables
First
X999999…………
ohh lol on the expendables thing danko is best russian
Oh right the team is forming, I wonder if Nightmare Moon will appear next. And further more, how she will react with Clare, she told him that she also love him.
Je Clare had 3 powerful woman's fall for him. He is gaining quite the name
Danko, Smashed as fuck and still manages to save the day.
That would have been
if u had called it that Trigger_Finger.
More please.
And her come round 2, one sister down, and another…well I hoped she don't end in the void. If Sombra is controlling her by fear, then Clare will only have to erase that fear, but can do the trick…oh I know a french kiss could work, and is not cheating on Luna because technically he is kissing Luna…sort off
Thank god Moon wasn't destroy, I was worry Sombra would kill her at some point, but she is still alive and can save him, I just hoped she doesn't die.
In another note, men Dave is on fire first Eclipse got herself horny, then Moon got out of trance in the most passion way possible, and know Chrysalis needs to have sex with him so their plan is complete, whats is next? Celestia know need him to rut her so she can be cured of a decease? man sexy woman's just continue to appear wanting to be rut their brains out, by him.
Somewhere in heave Elder is watching all thinking "Damm you Clare you lucky, lucky bastard"
Come on team Clare get in there and kick ass and take names!
you should have gone with the azure knight like
nightmare from soulcaliber
Umbra and or Penumbra could be cool names, as could solstice, equinox, Artemis... I could go on but I'm tired and lack coherence...
I would had go with something like Nightmare Knight, by the way, please tell me that Moon was serious when she told Clare that it will only as long as they wish and not some lie to fuse with him sooner.
Please tell me that they will separate once all this madness is over.
How about 'Moon Shadow' or 'Shade'?
So I have literally lost count of the total other show popups. so far I KNOW Star Wars and Dragon Ball Z/GT. Pretty sure I saw some others I can't remember... in total Great story.
2124416 dammit... yeah if I had of thought of Moon Shadow I probably would've went with that. Oh well, you win some you lose some
HA! EVEN CELESTIA'S STATUE KNOWS HOW TO TROLL!