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I'm not into the clop, but at least you make and effort to throw in some backstory, maybe the story can be enjoyable.

Comment posted by Fugly Duckling deleted Mar 3rd, 2013

Brilliantly done mate!

A nice story so far, though I was hoping yo wouldn't fall into the whole "meat is bad" trope. One, there are omnivourous, and carnivourous races that tghey have to deal with. Two, humans need to eat meat. Unless you just have you character eacting bugs, beans, and nuts all of the time.

Keep writing it man! :yay:

my favourite part was when you remembered me how long it had been since i listened to ac/dc in the end.... thank you:pinkiehappy:

This fic has caught my attention.I shall eagerly await for MOAR!!

I might be interested in..*sees sex tag, puts on pyroland goggles and headbutts big red button*LETS ROCK!

The dude must have shrunk big time. If he really was benching that amount, and now not eating meat....I don't care how many nuts,beans, and certain grains your eating. The daily protein intake he needed was enormous, and if you somehow get the required amount of protein the quantity of food to get there alone would kill any kind of healthy diet.

‘Man heaven has got some fucked up angels’

Like, Fave. You have my support. :twilightsmile:

This!?! I like this!

New spin on a classic idea, with spa ponies! :pinkiehappy:

I totally agree with Squid an Seraph. In order to keep at the level he was before he got sent to Equestria without eating anymeat he'd have to spend big portion of his day just eating for the protein needed. If he ate like he normally would without any meat he'd be hungry all the time an he'd lose alot of the muscle mass he had.

Wow, you're right! This got popular fast! Well, congratulation man! :pinkiehappy:
No wonder actually... it was an unique idea and new kind of human. It's not a really common fic, so it immediately picked up everyone's interest... :eeyup:
My reaction when I saw that story:
''Clop, Spa Ponies, body builder? Hohhooo, this will be really hard and rough... that's what she said...''
So yeeeeeaahhh.... :twilightblush:

Good job and have a good night!
~Adam

God damn that was fast. the chapter's pacing is ok, but the overall length is kinda short. The pacing is fast, and direct, and I like how it emphasizes it is daily routine.

Also, NON BRONY IN EQUESTRIA? THAT'S A FIRST:pinkiegasp:

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cam down sir. This here is 'questria! The plants have protein! Didn't you see the giant flowers that chased rarity in the comics?

[](/seriouslyluna) but I thought photo finish lived like in canterlot

Dat end. AUTO-LIKE activated

"Suddenly after I was lifting weights some portal opened up and zapped me away instantly."

Did you know the same thing happens to me EVERY time I use my blender?

Naw I kid, good first chapter.

“Who challenges the great, powerful IRON WILL!”

:trixieshiftleft: ... * simultaneous groan* :facehoof:

>character building
>plot development
>realistic emotions/reactions
:trixieshiftright:
This was unexpected, keep up the good work.

“What’s wrong Will? Pushing to many pencils lately”

there should have been an explosion

If it was me:
Lotus: Do you have any marefr-
ShagDragon: Hey, do you want to have sex?

Well it took me a day to decide if I should read this. The story is good but has some grammar/spelling errors but I congratulate you for this story to be in the Featured Box.

i like how this is post season 3. cant wait for all the twilacorn references:twilightsmile:

2209183 Yeah I know but the worst part was I never got to see it in the featured box. As I said to another friend of mine, it's like being a secondary character in Terminator 2 but never actually getting to see the movie:ajsleepy:

2208973 Was thinking Ron: What the fuck is this fucking tie buisness? as he fluffs Iron Will's tie. Will pushes his hand away. Iron Will: Oh knock it off already with the tie

I have this... Image that this guy is the stereotypical idiot dumb guy who does too much heavy lifting.

u a canadian brony?
if yes: BROHOOF!:pinkiehappy:
if no: then i guess i will be forever alone....:ajsleepy:

Their Japenese ponys so this is a Crop fic

Wow, that's the weirdest "portal to Equestria" I've ever seen!

2209508 Well I wouldn't call myself a 'Brony'. In my eyes Bronys err bronies... brownies... either way, now I forgot what I was going to say. But I am Canadian and best of all I'm a redneck so let's put a tarp in the back of muh rusty old Ford pickup truck and make it a pool

I got too much to read for tonight but I will read maybe tomorrow or something. Hopefully this one will last longer than your Milky Way story

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Hmmm... I do say... this reminds me of someone vaguely familiar but I can't quite put my finger on it


Well Twilight is a perv. I am horny. and I have to go to bed... Nope gonna clop.

2210314 Thumbs up just for Johnny Bravo :eeyup:

DAN THE MAN
Roosterteeth refrence is awsome

Ugh, you stopped when it was getting good. I take it Alow goes both ways? If so....:rainbowwild: And I had no idea Twilight could be very naughty, but then again, I don't read clop stuff a lot, and I'm not sure if this counts as clop per se but it's interesting for sure. I hope Ron will get a clue and treat that Lotus girl right.

Twilight wants the D......

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