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So only Three Gods want to do the right thing and help out everyone/everypony from the Caribou? 👍
While the others ignore Fluttershy's Plea and help for Equis/Equestria, and only care about who is the "Best God/Goddess"?!
Wow, those Gods and Goddess are a bunch of Jerks! 😡
I hope they could change their minds sooner or later?
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...Which is fitting for the majority of mythology, actually. Say what you will, but most gods and goddesses were assholes.
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Touche. 😒
they where eather jerks or super horny like zuse aka stick his dong into everything god of lighting.
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I'm considering adding a few others deities. The problem for is I dont want to use deities from the same pantheon and I play a limited amount of gods/goddesses
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It's Zeus. But, good point.
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Okay. But luckily, you got over 16 different Pantheons here.
And I can put the God Character List from the Official Website right here to make it easier.
https://www.smitegame.com/gods/
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I play the game so I know who the gods are. Not using Cthulhu in the story though.
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Well that's good. And as for Cthulhu? Thank God, I hope NOT! Because he is 999 Trillion Worse than the Caribou or anything bad. And he would rather F***** Up the poor MLP Multiverse.
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If you wish to continue this conversation you can dm me
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No thanks. I'm good.
Welp.... The Caribou awakened the gods' wrath. I hope they are ready for it....
I fucking hate the foe series but this is a good read normally I skip over foe series based stories but this one I like
Really? So MLP has their own Gods/Goddess, BUT they didn't do Shit against the Caribou??!! Oh, I can't wait for Hades ( Maybe Zeus and Poseidon getting involved), and the other OP Smite Gods/Goddess to make those MLP Deities REGRET IT for not helping the poor Pony Mares and other innocent!
The other Smite Goes/Goddess that DIDN'T help ( Yet! ), are just prideful and heartless jerks. I'm surprised that ANY Female Smite Goddess didn't try to help and punish the Caribou themselves with their Women FURY??!! What gives?!
As for the MLP Deities, they have NO Excuse for not helping! And they should be punished by Hades and other Smite Gods/Goddess that choose to help.
He is either really Cocky, or Super Retarded!!!!!! He has NO CHANCE against the True Gods/Goddess from Smite!!!!! And is that Raven from Odin? If so, by having Both the Greek and Norse Gods working together will be awesome!
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By F.O.E? You mean Fall Of Equestria. I agree with not wanting to read the original stories. But, I like the ones with the Crossovers with other Heroes, Anti-Heroes, and even Anti-Villains, and the Displaced KICKING and KILLING Caribou Ass!!! And save the Females of Equestria.
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I hope their Not "Ready", because even IF they did. HOW can they face a Real God or Goddess in Smite??!! Their only Horny Rapists, and Evil Invading Mortals that needs a Reality Check.
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yeah I agree and speaking of which I just heard that Tiamat is in Smite as well! I hope she teaches those Bastards a thing about respect I would like to see most of the gods and Goddesses rip the Caribou apart and snack on their dead corpses! whoa... I need to stop
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Dungeon's and Dragon's? The Five Headed Dragon Queen??!! Oh! They are so screwed!!!
Edit: Nevermind. She looks like someone else?!
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yeah they are in trouble and I don't want to start to think how pissed off Anubis, Kali, Ra, Osiris, Pele and Thor will be....
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Agreed. As for Tiamat. She is not exactly the Dungeon's and Dragon's Version with the Five Headed Dragon? But from the Babylon Mythology, right?
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yeah that is where she is from I think
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I am only using one deity from each pantheon and while I do play the game, the actual number of deities I play is low so it may be awhile before you see someone from the Japanese or Chinese pantheon.
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The raven is not Odin. The deity it is from isn't even from the Norse pantheon.
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That and it was the wrong bird. I meant a crow.
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So it was a Crow, and is NOT part of the Norse Mythology, like Odin? Then, who owns the Crow?!
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I've answered in a previous chapter.
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Ooohhhh! It's The Morrigan's Crow. Got it! 👍
Interesting.
I love the story but I can't help but fell sick every time I read how the mares are being abused
Make the false god Damian pay for what he did to equestria I want him to suffer and make it slow and painful for me will you😈😈😈
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Eh sure no promises though.
make all the Male and Damian pay for what they have done. I want to see them suffer in the worst ways as possible. Use the three alls Kill All, Burn All and Loot All I want all of the Males to Pay for this! they don't get any mercy at all! 👿
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Hot damn I never expected my shitty writing to get a comment with such emotion in it. I am very surprised.
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heh sorry but those that do this is very unforgivable it brings out the worst in me.
I think it is a good start. And judging from the rating (which is a good rating for a FoE story) others agree, though I would say you need an Editor for this. It would improve your chapters.
The paragraphs are also rather big, so it would be easier to read to make them into more and smaller ones. Maybe being more descriptive could be good too. Like where Fluttershy is, the position she is in and if you do porn being more descriptive overall. It is an interesting choice to ignore Fluttershy for the end of the chapter, though since the god is here for her I assume he will meet up with her still.
Now to the red collar from the end. She didn't quite seem all that red-collary, and I hope to see more differences between them and black collars in the future. Maybe some purples too? It would be an interesting concept to see them react differently and not all behave the same because of the different experiences and trauma. Red collars after all are the willing ones, so I assume they have a higher sex drive and enjoyment of debauchery and now would have to deal with it after they are freed from the caribou.