Fluttershy is lonely, and across the stars, another is misunderstood. Perhaps though, this does not have to be so. With the help of one princess of night, these two souls may just find what they yearn for.
Rated T for violence, use of alcohol, and some mild sexual references and situations.
I ask for your feedback, so don't forget to comment and let me know what you think.
Credit for cover art goes to BubblyBlackbird. Thank you for letting me use it!
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters directly associated with My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, nor the original storyline. Any and all original characters are owned by their respective creators.
Chapters (9)
First post
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Stupidity at its finest. I suggest editing to say something semi constructive, simply posting 'first', or anything in lieu of, is a bannable offense.
Drew, you already know my opinion on this story, however future chapters shall have them posted here instead of over at fanfiction. Welcome to the Light!
1907381 Don't mean to sound like an ass, but I have to agree with spacecowboy. Please don't leave a comment if you aren't actually going to say something constructive. Thank you, and good day. Don't take it personal, and enjoy the story.
All right
I must say this story is VERY unique, in a good way! Im currently at CH 4 and I like the originality of it!
1910847 Well good, because there's plenty more to come.
Did some fooling around with the pony generator and this is my take on Vega Morningstar, Although the story said silver hair I found it boring being 1 color so I made it 2 colors (sue me! :P )
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Updated: Made his hooves silver instead of the orangy color they were originally.
1910974 That's actually pretty nice. Well done, sir.
I was, as one should always be on stories with OCs, worried about how much they would live up to the "O" in their names. I don't think I'll have to worry anymore.
1916490 All of the OC's in my stories are unique. Just like people, they are similar in some ways, and very different in others. No two OC's will be the same, at least not in my writing.
1920298 i am still new so iv got to ask what is an OC?
1949416 OC = Original Character. This can refer to a character of the same race as the main characters of the storyline, or - like Vega - one that is completely different in nearly every way. Basically when you see the anagram "OC", expect a new character that you've likely never heard of.
1950154 Thanks
1950159 Sure thing. Any other legitimate questions that you may have, do not hesitate to ask.
i really do enjoy your stories....they hold characters that a person can relate to, and the fact that you incorporate the series into your stories, you are a wonderful writer. I look forward to reading more!
2008301 Thank you.
Hm...
Interesting. (Checks time; It's 3:07 A.M.) WAT DAH!!! Too.... Good.... CAANT RESIST THE STORY!!!!
Well, this is turning to be interesting. (Back to when I began reading) "Cmon, seriously! We have some hobo that lives over some other hobos when we could hear about fluttershy?? (Five seconds later) NOOOOOOZZZZ!!!!!! MOAR!!! PLEEAASSEE!!
Well then, I figured that by changeling, you meant dragon because of "The Devils Angel". Very interesting.
This chapter just gained the story another like, my good sir. Quite intriguing, might I say.
I'm surprised at saying this, but I think I am beginning to like this more than "The Devils Angel". Good job so far.
Keep it up, dude (Just don't forget about "The Demons Angel").
Brilliant as always.
All I can say is, How do you do it...
2071646 All I can say is, I don't know. Perhaps the parallel timestream of Equestria is sending me mental images to write...who knows.
Well, multiverse or not, just keep it up. Looking forwards to the next chapter!
2072507 Good.
amazing, amazing this chapter was nice and long, filled me with emotions, Betrayal? love? kindness
this fic is an amazing work of art
thanks for making my day!
Elixir
2075456 Thank you, kind reader. Your praise is appreciated.
I... I can safely say I've never read anything quite like this before. You really put the "O" in OC here. Awesome story!
yay I love the build up, the emotions almost brought me to shed a tear, the way you emapthyse with characters is unbelieivable and if this were a book I would buy 20 copys
nice chapter length too.
I am lookinging forward to MOAR
2243127 But of course. It wouldn't be very original if the character was cliche, flat, or static.
2245688 That is the idea. I don't write a story if I can't empathize with the characters themselves, because then it just isn't worth writing.
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too true too true
"HAHA
My favourite fic has yet again updated...now what to say?
One error spotted:
"didn’t know how to fly before then.” I sighed. “The only downside to this form is the need for copious amounts of warmth. Skytracers are not made for cold climes. It would be dangerous for one to live here during autumn or winter without a warm home.”"
- was this meant to be climates?
One Downside:
-not a huge problem but it is hard to keep up with the plot when it barely updates
Now for the positives:
-Another great length chapter, doesn't need to be longer.
-Gripping plot development
-absolutely f**king hilarious humour and jokes, makes me laugh every time.
-My favourite fic
-Great descriptions as always
-Yay
Thanks for updating
Elixir
2666290 "Climes" is a real word. Look it up.
interesting. will keep reading. thou the ending of this chapter worries me...
NEED CHAPTER 10, NOW!
Is this a crossover with something? I'm a bit confused.
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You too
The end felt throne in there but silt a good chapter
Would you please create more wonderful chapters please. I would greatly appreciate it.