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Mr101 #1 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · 2 ·

You promised, and you delivered! Time to read.

Regidar #2 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · 11 ·

>Fuck yes
>Still would tap that shit
>Is not a faggot who hates humazation
>Le hardcore horsefuckers get pissed

Mr101 #3 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · 2 ·

And delivered you did, great job. :twilightsmile:

Just what I expected.


(Joke) Alt. Title: The Babsfather Bonus Chapter: I'll Make You A Fanfic You Can't Refuse
...I wanna make a dumb joke here, but I can't after seeing that cover art. I just can't.


>Is not a faggot wh hates humazation

I like you. Like, legit. Stay classy, champ.

HAHAHA my real name is Sam

Helped her in the park for the first time ever.
Repayed with a BJ
Progresses into sex (understandable)
Instant love after he's been creepy stalking you?
That's where I end it.

A clopfic just for clop is one thing, but that's just stupid.

when you said that you thought that the adult human babs seed was hot i know a clopfic with her in it was next on your list

>real name is sam
>Fuck yes

2043048 one of my close internet friends is reading it right now, he has the same name :P

2043079 Dude....it's porn.

2043101 I'm laughing my ass of...it's sexy....funny....and best of all....IT USES MY REAL NAME

2043079> shut up man

2043108 People tend to say my clopfics have humour, even when I don't intend it! :rainbowhuh:

2043125 Relly...it's funny eather ways

2043102 It would have been perfectly fine without the baseless love. Now, if you had made it to where, after the sex, they pursued a relationship and hinted at them finding love later, then the issue wouldn't be there.

2043112 This is just hilarious. A guy can't express his opinion? People like you are why others find it hard to respect bronies. We all preach tolerance and such (I would like you to know that I did not downvote the story), but when somebody expresses an opinion on something you all blow up over it? Good job.

2043185 Duse...if you don't like it give it the thumbs down if not shut the hell up and leave us alone

2043196 You see, that's another issue. It's well-written and, despite my gripe about the stupidity of the love thing, there's nothing wrong with it. This is why shit stories that feed to the masses get so well promoted. It doesn't matter if the story was the most poorly written piece of shit ever, if it has Alicorn Twilight and Luna in a romance? Instant feature, yet the stories that touch on controversial issues get downvoted because 'Oh no, I don't like rape, so I've gotta downvote it to let everybody know that rape is bad'.

I vote based on whether or not the story is good, not on the content. Now, if this was poorly written, then I would have downvoted, but since I like the writing, but not the content, I will not promote, nor degrade it. Please, for the love of Celestia, don't get up in people's shit because you disagree with them

Comment posted by Ogatasensei123 deleted Jan 29th, 2013


EDIT: It was ok.

your getting a like regardless, but I should say that you should put more research into american slang terms, from the way you write it's painfully obvious that you're a Brit, or a European at least. (i.e in rubish: we say trash or garbage over here, you fancy me: probably would have said you think I'm hot, pretty: an american might have said that, but in this day and age it's more likely he would have said "hot" Bosoms: probably would have been tits, or boobs Cooter: probably just pussy off the wall: crazy, awesome, any positively affirming adjective) there's a lot of other over-lookable ones in there, but seriously, an american (like babs) would have said a lot of these things differently.

Ok, babs did sound a bit OOC, but seriously. This is good. Just a shame you focuses on the sex, and not the relationshit that are developing between them. That could be quite an interresting story :unsuresweetie:

This pleased me beyond words. I give you all my moustaches, my friend :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

It's such a shame that this fic is a oneshot, because it's awesome! :twilightsmile:

This is common problem in porn writing, but if it was her first time, shouldn't there have been pain and blood?

This was... okay. You broke suspension of disbelief several times during the sex scene, and it ended up running a bit long.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_pea.png

Also, yuo alt!Verse was kinda //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png I don't care about humanization of ponies, but the way you mixed references here was a bit off-putting.

The hymen can be torn through actions other than sex. Medical examination, injury, masturbation, disease, and physical exercise can all tear the hymen.

Heavy: Da, I be ok with dis
Private Funnyman: Heavy! Get out of my comments. I'll prank you for this
Rainbow Dash: I know, and it's gonna be so awesome :rainbowkiss:

Gentlemen, mr. orangefox has honored the entire unit. I've never seen humanized Babs Seed before, not a clopfic either. Good work son. You deserve a medal, but until Seeman and Captain Demoman give back my medals, u can have 4 moustache spikes.


Oh, and take a free Big Mac, and a derpy


I remember when I first saw the pic you used for the cover art.
I might've drooled a little. :rainbowwild:
Babs is best crusader, and seeing her in adult human form...

Oh boy! A great spot to identify pedophiles.


+10 internets if you can spot the creepy old dude in the back!

There's at least 80 at the time of this post.


Damn! YOU WIN THE INTERNET! :rainbowkiss:

2045004 In the front are the underage dudes, which means me, Regi, and...
Other non-pedophiles? :facehoof:
The horsefuckers are mostly in the middle rows, arguing amongst themselves.
The semi-normal people are scattered throughout, some in the front while others are hiding in the corners.
The comedians and the riffers are in the front, as usual.
The dickweeds and the scumbags are in the middle, getting thumb-fucked by the horsefuckers.
What the hell am I doing? :twilightoops:

Shitty title, fugly picture, and okay writing.

Eh, you tried.

Still find it weird that British people call 7 Up lemonade. American lemonade is way better.
Good story though.

2044829 as a king I have a few extra medals want some? (I've got aluminum, gold, cobalt, copper and some uranium ones for the kids) and as an alien I give the author 9 cyanide tablets out of 10.9372827203723727802783830397399
Have a good day earthlings,
King Lazaro Sol of Ziolia

......Scuse me for a minute....*walks away*

FINALLY!*Distant explosion*

2044208 Well, as others have said, the hymen thing isn't always applicable, but the pain definitely should have been there if she was as tight as it says and he was as big as it says. 'Cause, if a well-endowed fellow can just slip right in, then you've stuffed dildos and vibrators and such in there to make you quite loose. Inconsistency, but it's forgivable as it's porn and obviously nobody cares to be semi-realistic with porn....

Will I be arrested for reading this?... :moustache:


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