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When Twilight was a filly, she studied non-stop. Spells, books, and Princess Celestia took up all of her spare time. She never had any real friends when she was younger.
...Except Spike, that is. This story is about their first day together and the ups and downs of it.

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Comments ( 24 )

Nicely done, they are siblings.

Daw, such a cute fic! Nicely done!:twilightsmile:

not bad not bad:pinkiehappy:

What would happened if Twilight show Spike's baby pictures to her friends?

1976060 That might make for an excellent comdey fic. :rainbowlaugh:

Also the dawness, it is over 9000! :flutterrage:

Yeah, I always see them in that light. So cute.
Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked it!
Somepony should write that! That'd be hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:
Glad your da'www-o-meter could explode, friend.:trollestia:

very nicely done :eeyup:

Though them being shipped together is my favorite pairing, I have no problem with them being brother /sister long as no one crosses the line and make them mother/son *shivers* then I'm going to have to say no. You done real well on this :twilightsmile:


So much D'awww my heart can't take it.

So. Much. D'AAAAWWW!!!!! HHNNNGG!!!! THE D'AAW IS KILLING ME!!! :raritydespair::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::yay::rainbowkiss::pinkiesmile::derpytongue2::heart::heart:
unrelated mustache :moustache:

He seemed memorized by the feeling of it

Switch "memorized" to "mesmerized" :ajsmug:

But other than that...


One of the things everyone else seems to buy into that just doesn't make a lick of sense to me is the idea of a newborn dragon (or a newborn of any species) being given to a young filly to raise with next to no supervision. There's a grand, obvious flaw in this idea, and the fact that the intelligent, observant, forward-thinking fanbase we have still thinks this is what happened just confuses the dickens out of me. Sometimes I even fear it's because they don't think Spike is worth that much thought, but I doubt that's the case.

Of course this doesn't mean I didn't love this little fanfic. It was enormously enjoyable and I thank you for writing it. Seriously, though, you need to put a warning in the synopsis. This is concentrated adorableness.

Nice story, but I'd highly advise you read over the story again and edit it, there are a lot of errors, especially with capitalization.

Cute story. I think the bit with "Shiny" was probably unnecessary, though.

I don't ship then either, nor Spike x (any possible shipping) but when they are being best friends, it's ADORABLE!Good job!

One theory I've heard is that Spike imprinted on Twilight and wouldn't leave her side, That is how he acts around her though he has gotten more social.

So... you ship them together but say Portraying them as mother and son is crossing the line? lol

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