Hehe read this story before and I still love it XX FTW

I don't quite know how to feel about this, so I'll go with my grammar nazi tendencies and point out that you missed a few commas in there, like in this sentence:

“Pinkie let me explain,” began Twilight suddenly caught up in the situation she had pushed her friend into.

It should be:

"Pinkie, let me explain," began Twilight, suddenly caught up in the situation she had pushed her friend into.

But besides that, I suppose it was well done. Clop isn't really my thing, and I honestly just clicked on this looking for some Pinkie/Pinkamena, but a lot of the scenes were pretty funny (Twilight trying to explain to Spike was priceless) and the characters seemed pretty IC for the most part.

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Oh! You made "Of Sound Minds"! That explains so much!

... Err, Not saying that it's BAD or anything, I just... I was just...

I'll be leaving now.

The end was just precious.

Very interesting little fic, a lot better than I thought it would be, and I was laughing almost constantly throughout. I'm really intrigued by the possible reactions AJ would have to Spike's curiosity.

lol...

Is this a one-shot, or is there going to be more?
If it's a one-shot, you should probably mark it as "complete".

Oh, and VERY GOOD STORY.

Is this going to be a Pinkie/Pinkie shipping?
I'm cautiously curious to read up tomorrow what kind of story lurks under that description..

While purely as a clop fantasy scenario and scene I would rate this highly, this is some of the most OOC canon destroying misguided interpretations of character I have read. And since I read stories for the story, not the clop I have to thumb this down.
Stories with cloppy scenes are usually OK, but full-on clopfics shouldn't try to have storylines, they are usually bad if not traumatizing.

I love this. It's funny, but no-nonsense sex that doesn't take itself seriously. Just the right kind of attitude to work. There are assloads of grammatical errors, but I kept reading anyway. Also, I love how you actually managed to weave naughty words into Pinkie's rants without it feeling like she broke character.

It feels unfinished. There are a half dozen loose ends.

This was awesome, and that ending was just plain cool

O...M...G The ending was HILARIOUS

hot stuff

The ending was...WTF? I found this pretty funny. Great job writing this story. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the great writing!

Great story! Thrilling action and well written.

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LIVING THE DREAM

This was highly enjoyable, but i do hope there will be more. Because it's the first i've seen in such a vein. Because i want to see if Twilight gets 'friendship lessons' that would make Celestia impressed. Because i want to see what Applejack's response is.

Because Pinkamena hasn't really gotten off yet.

But, mainly because it was Most Excellent. Sweet story, sis

would it be wrong to want a x clop now?

...spit?