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Cosmonaut


Writer/Artist who's been active since the inception of the fandom.

Comments ( 183 )

1641674
... oh, shit.
We're doomed.
Looks DELICI- err, interesting.
Will read NO-later.

1641714
Oh, sweet, loving joy. He's here. All hail Regidar.
I'm telling you, man, DISEASE
And also, with the addition of this story, my read later list is the year the Civil War began.

This.... turned out a lot better than I thought it would at first.

1641781
HAHA HAHA HAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Please. That thing's been culminating since I got here.
I never actually read anything, despite I say I'm going to.
But I never said that.

Now, this was good. You could make this into a series. On that note, please do!

This was... better than I was expecting. Nicely done.

This is marked as incomplete so there's more coming?

Well now, never read that kind of fic before but it was definitely well done and an enjoyable read. :trollestia:

That feeling when you are playing with your cat. You get an erection, and she bitings your dick

"A niggle of worry wormed into her thoughts."
A niggle
niggle
Man, what is this.

Moar Rumble? Moar Rumble.

I shall see to it that we have more of Rumble :derpytongue2:

Okay, wow, that was pretty damn good. This was one of the few fics that I actually read through, and I have to say it was worth it. I picked up one case where you confused past and present tense, and other where there's a she missing the h, but that really doesn't matter much. This story was very good, a lot better than I expected it to be.

You made me like something I tell myself i shouldn't like. Curse you.

But seriously, some damn nice work.

1642000 Go away, right now. You're weird and annoying and I have seen stupid and fucked up comments from you before.

Get your ass out of here.

1642093 Please why. You are titled brony, a brother in my ceremony, we laugh. We have no need of this 'hate'

1642108 "No Longer Louse."

Need I say any more?

Eldorado
Moderator

Does this mean you're back writing again? :pinkiehappy: I miss editing your awesome Rumble shipfics.

“Rumble, are you pulling my leg?”

as Cheerilee read on

Pretty damn hot, I must say; not often that a straight clop gets my attention, but this one wins.

1641833 I actually would like to see this continue. Not just as pure clop but to actually see the relationship grow and how they interact with others would be nice. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png

Rumble, Spike, Featherweight, and Pipsqueak get all the mares! Fancypants... not so much. Soarin' is mostly meant to be gay or with Rainbow or Spitfire. End of story. And Braeburn needs no fuckin' mare because he's a friggin' BAMF when he's gay. So is Caramel. And Macintosh... He's just a fucking pimp!

Good on you Bro.

This is a oneshot...
But I can't help but want more!
I want to see their love truly blossom!
Rumble be there for Cher in her time of need, defending her from the wicked stallions who
seek to abuse her.

We demand that you make more of their love and story blossom!
Do not fail us.

That. . . was mother-bucking awesome. :raritywink::twilightblush:

I honestly was a little iffy on reading it at first, just because I wasnt in the mood for this kind of story. But, I haven't read many stories with Cheerilee and thought I would give it a go.

Boy, was it worth it. :pinkiehappy::trollestia:

1641747
Could be worse.
It could be the year in which in all the world there is but one technology... a rusty sword for practicing proctology.

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1642839

I once pointed out that the only way for an earth pony to perform a prostate exam was with their tongue. & now I have again.

1642108 that comment was a little wierd though.:applejackunsure:

1642875 BAD MAN! *wacks with newspaper* NO MORE CLOP FOR YOU!

Dah feelz.

Ahhh, it's nice to see Cheerilee happy again. Hopefully Rumble supports her from here on, and hell, on a military paycheck, he could see Cheerilee through retirement!

That'd be pretty nice, actually... though it makes me wonder.

Just how old is Rumble right now, and how old is Cheerilee in comparison? I'm picturing Rumble as 18 or 19... so wouldn't that put Cheer in her 30s?

I don't think there is anything wrong with this, we let Spike get away with being shipped with characters older he is and if Rumble is as old as Applebloom then and Cherilee is roughly the same age as Big Mac minus one or two years because we see her in the school play with filly Rarity, then there is only a 6-8 year age gap. The simple solution to the public nature of their pairing is for them to wait a few months after Rumble graduates school.

Regardless of whether or not the reader liked the content, that all comes down to personal preference. The grammar is good with only minor typos here and there, the syntax is well done and formatting is handled very well. For as cloppy as this is without delving into the actual content there were a few genuine moments between the two of them and what could have been turned into a disturbing fic was handled with a level of tact. when all is said and done, the audience doesn't feel dirty after reading it, a lot of that comes from Cherilee not acting like a deranged pedophile and Rumble being roughly an adult.

Peace Out.

As a writer who wrote a Cheerilee X Rumble fic only a month ago, I approve of this story. Although Rumble was a bit too mature, and Cheerilee unrealistically carefree about the repercussions, but a horny read nevertheless. *picks up pants*. Thank you and g'night.

1641702 where the fuck is that gif from?

Incomplete?:rainbowderp: That means there may be more.:pinkiehappy:

1643461
I want to know that too, but either way, I'm saving it! :rainbowlaugh:

I noticed this is listed as incomplete.

Excellent.

A great fic!^_^

Really good writing!^_^

The only thing I found wrong with it is it's not me fucking her now.^_^

Awesome very awesome xD I LOVE IT:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Wait, they're going to close down the schoolhouse? There aren't any new foals for her to teach? What about Pumpkin and Pound Cake? I question the premises of your pony-based erotica, sir/ma'am. :ajbemused:

I have the weirdest boner right now.

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Wow this was surprisingly fucking amazing :rainbowderp: Good work :D

That was interesting, even though it was short. What if some pony walked in on them?
1641693 Is that Friends?

AKA Cheerilee's Garden if it were clop.

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this...
this was fantastic.
good work friend
take my thumb

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