1951462 I personally like Derpy Hooves over Ditzy Doo. But its personal preference I suppose.

1951502
That is true. Though both names could be used. Ditzy "Derpy" Doo Hooves. Derpy makes a better nickname then a real name.

1951578 I do like that idea. But I just stuck with Derpy. Its cute and shows her silly goofy side. I don't view the name as some others seeing it as the writer depicts her as stupid ect. I tried to just make her goofy and clumsy while giving her her own unique intelligence. But I am sure most won't see it like that.

1951600
That is if some want to over analyze her name, and why you chose it.
Me, I just don't like that name for her. Since the start. I just like Ditzy Doo better.

1951609 That's why I like your critiques. you can analyze well and not read to deep into anything. makes conversing with you fun when you want a debate and or just to do so.

1951620 Hands. and Hooves for feet.

1951627
Thank you. I found the few debates I got in with you fun as well.
Though it is funny. Sometimes i do think that I over analyze some things.
I am going to read the rest of the chapter tomorrow, so I will leave some reviews then.
Good night.

1951731That was the plan. Thank you!

Ah, I see it's been posted! Splendid! Well, time to get to reading, looks like I'm going to be here a while.

1951799 Haha Don't be afraid to give critique's, my friend.

1951810 your avatar...Lol Thanks, I was going for cute.

1951886...good tears or bad tears?

1951920 Anthrop = Hands and then hooves for feet. In my personal opinion. Thanks!

1952009 Thanks for the complement my friend.

Oh dear Reaper, you do have a talent for erotica.

1952100 Well I am glad you enjoyed it.

1952103 And if for nothing but to not seem shallow, the rest of the story was very good as well. Had you gone from the admission scene to a PG, 'happily ever after' ending I'd have not been the least bit disappointed.

I guess I'm saying the clop, was just the cherry on top.

1952120

I guess I'm saying the clop, was just the cherry on top.

That is exactly how I wanted it to seem since It could end at chapter 4 if you didn't want to read the clop scene.

Anthro ponies??? But I like pony ponies!

Excellent work once again! You've crafted quite the story here! Now, I'm not going to say it's a masterpiece but you've done pretty well regardless. The story had its quirks but nothing too major. Definitely a more sensual fic than last time around, I like that we got to see the relationship develop in this story. Not much else I can say. I'm a bit out of it at the moment but if you'd like I can read back through the chapters and identify any spelling/grammatical/punctuation mistakes. After I'm done resting, of course. Not particularly necessary but the offer remains.

God damn! Great story, definitely reading this again!

That...was...best....story....EVER.

That picture.... has KNEEEEEEES!!!
Death to anthros, burn in righteous fire!

1952273 Sorry you disapprove.

1952387 Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. you can do whatever you want if you wish it. I don't mind either way.

1952424 I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

1952536 Thanks for the complement! I appreciate it.

1952811 Anthropomorphics will be around forever! You could never burn them to nothing!

1952974 INFIDEL DIE!

1953600 You are a funny person.

This.......Is.........Very nice actually! Good work man!

Moar please....

A very lovley story.
Though, there were a few parts where quatation marks was missing from dialog, and actions had quatation marks. Still a good read.

another outstanding story by an outstanding author, keep up the great work

ALL OF MY YES.
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1955498 Yes and no. unstable proofer to be accurate. However, I released this one without help on purpose because I needed to see if I really am getting an better at writing from my first fic and I am. And yes, yes I did mean bridal.... cannot believe I did that..Lol! I am glad you enjoyed it despite its obvious flaws though. Thank you for taking the time to catch all that.

1955639
So much yes to be found with this story as a whole. Adorable and comical in the right places. Small grammatical mistakes did not detract from a great read. You have earned yourself a new stalker good author so prepare yourself. Looking forward to more from you, should you need any editing assistance in the future feel free to drop me a tell.

1957098 I know, I'm horrible.

1957296 Lol wow, thanks you for catching that. That might be funnier then the actual comedy scenes I wrote.

1957331 If your using Msn, that's why.

.... Awesome. The clop was just the icing on the cake by this point. Props man.

Good lord, i have acquired diabetes from the pure sweetness of this story, i done run out of all my remaining dawwwwwww's sadly, thus leaving me with the mess in my pants. lolz

1957665 Thanks, I really wanted to give Derpy her wants and desires here. And not just turn her into more or less a slave in bed.

1957856 Thanks, hope you continue to read on and enjoy it!

1957975 Lol! That's what I was going for in a way.

1959179 Thanks, I appreciate the complement.

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So much epicness. I loved this. Kudos, man

1959978 Thanks a bunch! I am so glad you enjoyed the read!

Quite romantic, so very heart felt.
I really enjoyed reading this, I would bet that foals are on the way in the year to come.
I would carry a combat knife if I had to fight a anthropic pony stallion.

I love it. Great story.

1962753 I guess everyone wh jas has a hard life has a little Stu in them Lol! Oh well. I lol'ed at your dialog though.

1961199 I am sure this will have a sequel as well. Assuming I can think of one. Thhanks for the love!

Got to say this is the longest clop I've read we'll done

1952022 Welcome, though I will never understand why I wasn't notified of your response...

1963507 Lol yeah, That's my style I suppose. Glad you enjoyed the read!

1963718That is strange; I wander why.

1965252 It's not exactly the first time it's happened either.

1968065 Yeah, we all have our own views on what they look like so I left out some details on purpose for the reader. I tried to work in tail and wing use in as much as possible without seemingly making it not needed. I will try to do better next time.

1968319 Lol Not intentional either.

Dang, dis guy got to enter the Derpgon.