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Rarity Belle


A Dutch gentleman of leisure, living for pleasure, since mirth is my measure. Writing stories that are (mostly) unique and psychological of nature and visiting conventions whenever I can.

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The most impressive engineer in the rainbow factory was doctor Atmosphere himself. He was also head of the weather department in Cloudsdale. What he also knows, is that his clock is ticking and nearing its end. Though his life had been nothing but bloodshed and tortures. He knows his soul is tainted if not destroyed. In one last, desperate, attempt to clean his soul, he writes down all of his actions in a memoir. The truth and the brains behind the place of horrors, shall be revealed through his final, written words.

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Please take note that the story 'Rainbow Factory' MUST have been read to understand this story. 'Pegasus Device' on the other end, doesn't need to have been read. This was just a silly idea I thought that would be worth writing out. I want to thank a friend of mine, Miles, for letting me come up with the idea on 10-30-2012.
Credit for the cover image goes to the original creator.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Before you are all going to complain about certain grammar errors and structural errors, I want to point out that as a Dutchmare trying to write the best she can in English, may give up some small mistakes. I re-read the story countless times, making sure I got every single mistake. So do not blame me if there is one or two left. Thank you for taking this in mind if you decide to comment and I hope you enjoy or enjoyed this story. ~Rarity :duck:

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I like it so far. Especially the lines from the song. Great work, keep it up.

1548379 Why thank you darling, and yes, yes I will keep it up.

1544192 Wow, Dutch? I always imagined you being more of a Britishmare, but hay, learn something new everyday :pinkiehappy:
Happy Friday

1549412 I know how to cover up my tracks fairly decent darling. And yes you do, everypony learns every day. And a happy Friday to you as well, may I ask for your opinion about the story though?

1549465 Had school, and just read it. I absolutely loved it. You wrote it to make me feel sympathetic for the poor fool. :rainbowwild:

1550923 Seems like somepony figured out my plan. But I am more then glad that you love it.

1551128 I also got the really faint My Little Dashie reference with the father-daughter thing.

1551180 Never intended to make it a obvious reference or a reference at all. I originally thought about it while thinking deeper about things that happened in RF to create that. But one can see it as a MLD reference yes.

HMB

I love it! I felt like I had his pain..but I tried to ignore that. Also, I love it when authors make something more realistic if I will. Like as in Equestria isn't much a perfect utopia, there of course is darker sides to everything. And how such a 'happy' sounding factory having rainbow in it makes you think do as it is. Yet you have it a dark secret, and I love things like that.

1574551 I am glad you like it my dear. And I didn't know I wrote it that powerful that his pain could be felt, but that makes it only a bonus. Equestria isn't an utopia at all, NightMare Moon, Discord, Changelings, if you catch the drift I am going on. I will see if I can make the next chapter somewhere this week. But again, I am glad you enjoyed the story. ~Rarity

1574551>>1551180>>1548379 Second and final chapter is up and running. ~Rarity

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