After an unfortunate incident, Rarity has to live with a new set of metal limbs but her life only goes more and more downhill afterward.
With the mad mare she threatens to become, it is up to one of her friends to stop her, if not save her from the venomous new her.
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Donations are welcome.
My final candidate for my cancelled stories. I admit, the ending could have been done better and explanations given deeper. Well, the over all story could have been a lot longer... But this story has been sitting around since July of 2012.
Cover art made by drakeybaby
Chapters (1)
So ironic, in the last issue of Amazing Spider Man, Peter dies in Otto's body, and processes his memories into Otto's brain, while in Peter's body, Otto becomes the Superior Spider-Man.
My, my, miss Rarity, perfect story
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Well, there is something you don't see every day...
2503277 Far from it my dear, far from it I'm afraid.
2505352Especially on my birthday, never expected that, really
2505569 The levels of expecting things have gone through the roof here!
2505352 You should see the backlash Marvel's getting over it
2506946 Something I can quite understand about it. Must be one twisted storyplot.
2507769 Twisted by ending the Amazing Spider Man comic series. Not to mention Otto living Peter's life, his romances, the Avengers, etc. All the while, Peter's secretly a second concious and trying to reclaim his body.
2507796 Well, things just began to mess up good here.
Very intriguing.
Actually, to be honest, this story feels complete. It shouldn't say 'Cancelled', it already has an ending! So in a nutshell, the first chapter is the only chapter, and it settles in smoothly to end this 'Cancelled' story.
2916294 As much as it is true, and the ending feels like an ending, it just doesn't feel right to me. It was a story that began without a lot of brainpower to begin with anyway. I wanted to do more with it, expand upon it's legacy of super heroes and villains but, I did miss the bullet with this one in my eyes.
2916367 Ok.