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The Dark Ghost
I am the second alone in a faceless crowd a human caught in monochrome dreams I scream to wake up my voice drowns deep underground only the dead can hear me see me
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A fic that I wrote for Nightmare Night.
I took a lesson from rainbow factory and pulled from the scars of history
There's not enough grim dark of Applejack so i wrote this.
I'm sorry if this offends anyone, but we have to remember the past.
And learn to let it go.
Wow. That's all I have to say. It was pretty good, but messed up.
Also, what does CCC stand for, I didn't see it in the story
Damn, this reminds me of that one story uh... 'Terran Uprising' or something like that.
Got lost to the bowels of the internet forever. Good story, but the premise was weak as hell.
As for this, I'll put it on a read later.
1495446 Oh thank you. But what did you think of the story?
(yes I know it was messed up i felt bad writing it)
1495267 Cu Clux Clan.
1495711
Spelled Ku Klux Klan, my friend.
1495779
The name Ku Klux Klan was taken already. I had to spell it differently.
it's a shame people are disliking this. I want to hear what they don't like so can anyone who disliked please comment?
I think the reason people are disliking this is because a lot of the mane 6 are dead. And based on the letter at the end, my AJ is dead as well, which sucks.
But I gave it an up thumb soley on the fact that it really isn't that bad of a story. Just replace the characters and you have yourself a good dark fic.
Oh, and dark fics notoriously get more dislikes than any other category on fimfiction simply because they are DARK fics.
hmm being black myself all i thought soon as i saw white robed ponies was just ".....really now?".....meh doesn't mean much personally being past actions, but onto the story i felt bad to point of sheddin a tear for applebloom
and twi 
as well as the rotten and fresh apple symbolism was a nice touch as well in my opinion. Some pity for Aj 
seeing as she hung herself in the end.........being able to celestia's reaction to the events would have been a interesting piece to end with....
i liked it it was a well writen fic to me idk about others who dont voice what they dont like about it :P and a little cupcakes reference in there?
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i'm been thinking about writing an Applejack's perspective on "Hanging by a Stem." Just checking to see if there would be any interest in this. what do you guys think? Should i write it?
1506714 yeah that sounds like a new smart like idea im all for it
I really want to read Celestia's reaction to her favorite student's horrible death. You should write that.
Alright, with all honesty, I'm taking what I said in Skype back.
This premise is insulting. Very insulting. It brings up a lot of dark memories for readers, no matter what their race.
But the fact that it nearly brought me to tears, terrified me, gave me hope then tore it apart, you have here a good story.
I both hate it for the core premise and the fact that an entire town conspired against two ponies, but enjoyed it because it scared the shit out of me. My imagination is really crazy, so I find it easy to put myself next to the characters.
It was powerful, it was hectic, the symbolism was clear, and the character interactions hit me hard. Everything in this story tore at me.
Final word? Choose something different as your subject next Nightmare Night, but never fucking stop writing. Some language changes here and there, and you will be one fucking amazing writer.
You get an upvote. Clean up your language, fix up the grammar mistakes, and you'll have a readable story that will flip someone's stomach. You will never get a favorite from me, at least on this story, however. The premise is sickening.
That's that, then.
Wow, I loved this story, made me kinda laugh actually because of the CCC
Keep up the good work, making stories like this. You may like my story if you enjoyed writing something like this
1986571 i have written other stories, but none of them as awful as this one. You can find them at "the ghost" alternate account. I have this account ready for anything I think might insult my readers. but yes my other stories are also kinda dark. Take a look.
Applejack's character needed some work, for someone that had to be intimidated into joining she was pretty eager to rush back and kill an enemy of the Clan, if she really doesn't want to be a member she could have just run off and pretended she thought those were police sirens. And why would she offer to lure two of her friends to their deaths if she wasn't a "real" member of the CCC? I can understand going along with the idea if it meant keeping Applebloom safe, but I can't imagine her offering any ideas or taunting Rarity unless she really does believe in the CCC's ideals.
Ehh.... a little weak , I mean Twilight is probably the most powerful unicorn ever and having her horn touched knocks her magic out. That seems a little cop-outy .
2560964 It works on all unicorns as far as i'm concerned otherwise they are overpowered when fighting pegisi and earth ponies.
This was more f***ed up than cupcakes.
Good job.
Couldn't she had teleported away with rares it seems a little far fetched for twi not to use magic
2979018 she got something done with her horn.
2907698 thank you :)
I didn't know how offensive this fiction might be, even with the early warning. Guess I made a big mistake...
the sheeridiocy of this piece is astounding. there is no way thsi organization of murders could fourish under the existence of Celestai...........
also the whole i'll murder mah friends over prejudice that has NOT existed for a millenium, would not have been able to be the element of honesty. pretty sure that is part of the credentials of being wielders of a chaos killing power.
also, these ponies owuld all die within a week at most............... never fucking hurt twilight. never. cause celestia will show you exactly how she has managed to keep her kingdom alive and flourshing for a millenium.
Wow, people sure are plothurt whenever their favorite pony dies and click the dislike button, totally disregarding the facts that:
1. This story is well written, exactly what is required of it's categories.
2. It has deeper morale about sub-cultures and how we are affected by them.
You dear author deserve a like and that is what I give you.
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So how is this "CCC" any different?
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It should need more force than just contact. Maybe a good knock on the horn jams it or something.
Klan in Equestria
nice
4216994 If you are looking for my other stories they are on "the ghost" account. I like to keep my uber dark fan fiction and my normal dark fan fiction separate.
I have a feeling that pinkie is also in the clan... she's just got a wider range marked to include pegasi to, so get ready for cupcakes!
......this story was just bad. not only the idiocy of ductape somehow blocking unicon magic (heat is producted by magic it seems, and ductape adhesive melts quickly enough), but the idea that there would be this level of stupidity when the racism is of a far lesser level, ESPECIALLY in ponyville.
not to meniont that if applejack had the willingness to cold bloodidly kill twilight, and not just strat shooting face and crushing heads of the people who SHOT applebloom......... it was just stupid. it was more ooc than fucking cupcake pinkie pie. at least she had the personality still despite what she was doing.
also adding guns in a further deduction.
4410977 I only use this account for my awful fics that I want to publish. That was the original intent. However some idea's won't die easily
I am currently working on a parody of this story, with a massacre and 'agressive negiotiotion's' from an OC
4829084 Oh cool! Let me know how that turns out.
4838987 should be online 2-3 days!
4839221 I don't see it.
Grim and dark and very believable as hate can make people do awful things. And the worst kind of hate is old grudges that never go away.
5252140 can you be a little more clear?
Be clear? Read a history book, look to current events. Track the arguments and the anger down to its source. Those grudges and hates go back far longer than anyone alive or who can remember them. The Middle East-tribe on tribe violence going back 1200 years, religious leadership succession issue the same, outside invasion issues a 1000 years ago. Land ownership as far back as 2100 years ago. No one alive remembers the people involved other than names and dates in books. Old grudges die old lonely deaths long after those who created those grudges and hates are bones and dust and forgotten.every continent has stories, every part of the species known as man has them.
5252346 Well put
5723373 I read a lot, and history is a passion of mine. Given time you can backtrack most of todays world issues real easily. Sadly.
Could be a bit more graphical (might as well all the way?) But nice twist on the end.
Dark. Pretty fucked up. Sorta liked it. But why you didn't you include the Pegasi too? They're not exactly in the minority.
Still, not bad.
Oh God, this aged like milk
Not to be rude or anything...but the story is just...bad.I understand that it's probably just gore for the sake of gore, but the plot and grammar are atrocious.Also this bit "he covered her horn with duck tape".First of all, it's "duct" and second...I find it hilarious that duct tape disables magic.Like, how??