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Pinkie Pie is the weirdest pony in the world. How did this happen? Well let me tell you

This is the reason my friends don't let me drink apple juice don't expect too much I was really tired.

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The Dark Ghost

The Dark Ghost #2 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4430449 Yes. However I was not expecting so many negative votes. I was expecting some but not this many.

The Dark Ghost

The Dark Ghost #3 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4430449 I might just delete this story if no pony enjoys it. I was hoping at least one person would like it.

LeoneHaxor

LeoneHaxor #4 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

Listen to this while reading it, it's perfect!

The Dark Ghost

The Dark Ghost #5 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4430510 too bad I removed the story

LeoneHaxor

LeoneHaxor #6 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4430517 Wow, that was fast.

...while you're on, wanna give my story a read?

Zpothu

Zpothu #7 · May 22nd, 2014 · 2 · ·

This story is actually really good, just unusual. This really feeds my imagination.

I actually got really aroused. I love how they keep alternating the role of predator and prey. She starts out predator and eats the small version without being aware that the situation will soon reverse. Then that pinkie is now prey and she is eaten while she's still eating.

Before I read this, I had not thought about the merits of being a predator and prey simultaneously. Dominating and being dominated are supposed to be mutually exclusive experiences. But this story shows you that they're not. This scenario gets the best of both worlds.

This story is also fun to imagine humanized pinkie in, because humans are slightly sexier to me. Even the chewing and the crunching and the confusion is hot. Really hot.

Anyway, dude, I'm glad there's people as crazy as me. Brohoof!

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #8 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

I-... wha-... HUH!?

I won't go so far as to say it's bad, but I don't quite know if it's good.

I shall leave the like/dislike clicker-ma-jiggy unclicked.

The Dark Ghost

The Dark Ghost #9 · May 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4430680 hehehe I'm glad there are too

Glowing Ember

Glowing Ember #10 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

nonono keep it! i like weird stories!

BleedingRaindrops

BleedingRaindrops #11 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4430490
There is a rule I've come to find true just about everywhere: No matter how good it is, someone will hate it, and no matter how bad it is, someone will love it.
I do believe at least seven people found this enjoyable.

That said, this wasn't terrible. Sure it could use some fixing up, but it's a great idea to start with. You need to work a bit on your tenses, and this became difficult to follow during the section that loops—though that has nothing to do with the fact that it loops. I'm guessing you didn't hire an editor for this. You should. It can really help your writing if you have a skilled second pair of eyes look it over to challenge your creative ideas. This way the best ones make it through, and the worst are weeded out.

I did really like your Pinkie jargon, though. Had absolutely no trouble reading it in her voice.

The Dark Ghost

The Dark Ghost #12 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4431962 Yeah I should have never revoked it. I just doubted myself after I got 9 dislikes in a row is all.

Cheesey Burger

Cheesey Burger #13 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Hehe that was confusing to read but a fun confusing. Its a shame a few didn't like it but I thought it was quite a unique story compared to most. Given you a like and a fave since I had a good giggle at it. So keep up the good work!

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BleedingRaindrops

BleedingRaindrops #14 · May 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4431979
That happens some times. One of my most popular stories got about 12 dislikes before it got a single like, but then it got like 80 likes. A good friend who knows how to be brutally honest can be an excellent indicator in this case, because if they're not afraid to tell you if it's bad, you know it's good if they say it's good.

Tokai