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Zervon Tora


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Should of and could of will eat away at your soul. Somepony must be responsible. It’s all part of the blame game.

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I guess I can kind of understand the logic.

I cannot… I think you have to live it.

Should of and could of will eat away at your soul.

They definitely eat away at my soul every time someone writes those... :twilightangry2:

"Should have" not "of".
"Could have", not "of",

This has been your Grammar Nazi Moment Of The Day. :twilightsmile:

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Okay, that was a well needed laugh. Thank you. I must have let my back home accent get in the way of writing that. Good grammar is important for documents of state. Please keep up the fight one word at a time.

"people die if they are killed"
-emiya shiroe

This moved me. It was so unexpected when I clicked on it. My only regret is that I wish it was longer.

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Thank you! Once Applejack reached acceptance, I couldn't see dragging the story on.

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I can understand that. Some stories have a natural conclusion, and some have to be forced. This story caused my glasses to fog up. You have a natural talent and I hope you keep writing.

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Have you considered writing a prequel? How AB and DT fell in love. The decision to have a foal using risky magic? It could be a few chapters worth of writing. I'd love to see more of this.

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Life happens and I wrote this.

Now I have considered a sequel with Rarity and Twilight, that would span before and after this story.

I do like to write romance, so a prequal does sound like something I should take up.

Creativity abounds.

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