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In celebration of Nightmare Night at the end of this month, our lovely Elijah Goldberg pulls some stories from the darker regions of his mind. Hilarity ensues.

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Interestingly enough, I was listening to Enya while I wrote this. Funny stuff, huh?

Oh...oh my...horror? Well, can't be worse than that haunted house I'm going to tonight...

EDIT: *blinks* I don't know. I really really don't.

You can't scare me, Reggie.
I played Slender and only urinated 3 total liters.
EDIT: Just read it. Creepy. Not scary. Props, though. Very well written.

Hey, nice job.
A couple of small errors: Shining Armor has no 'u' in it. Although armour is spelt as such if you're not from the US, in this instance, it's his name so we can't go changing it :P
And you wrote your's once. Sneaky little apostophes. :twilightoops:
Thanks for sharing. I'm curious as to how this works out for poor filly Twilight.

It has too much of a 'fighting chance' feeling to it to be horror, but if that was intentional, then I have no other problems with this.

1478428 That was sort of the idea. Things will get explained in further chapters.

I do hope you're going to finish this before October comes to an end. It just won't be the same reading a fanfic like this outside the month of Halloween.

1490701 I'll try and slide a chapter on tonight.

Why is this man so good?

*turns to man*

Why are you so good?

*realizes is staring at wall*

Damn.

"I'm going to eat so many crumpets, it'll be a crumpocalypse!"

1512328

Many people are. Including this one. This one has not gotten enough sleep lately. This one is hallucinating. This one is tired. So tired....


BUT NO! I WILL NOT SLEEP! THE TOAST SHALL NOT TAKE ME! WORDS SHALL COMFORT! WORDS SHALL PROTECT! AND THESE WORDS SHALL BANISH YE! VICTORY! VICTORY!VICTORY!VICTORY!VICTORYVICTORYVICTORYVICToryvictoryvictory... :pinkiecrazy:

Cool story, bro.

1512362 Oh we will get along so well.

the story picture is scarier than this

1692944 I love you too.

The draconequus looked down at the pony before smiling again. Twilight wanted to cry, but her eyes had gone dry. She didn’t even feel scared anymore, just... numb. Uncomfortably numb.

Yes. YES. YES!

Sorry, I can't help myself from commenting on Pink Floyd references.

2053974 Bt bby
I nu lurve yah N-y mre.
So sadi brb gon dye :fluttercry:

Hmm. I wrote a story myself about a dream Twilight had where she had to face all kinds of nightmarish creatures. I finished it at around 12,000 words with an edit I plan to do in the future making it about 20,000. It being my very first story I wrote for the pony fandom.

It was very similar to this in a way. Monsters chasing around Twi with discord showing up here and there. I never published it as it's no where near the level I want it to be and serves little point other than to torture Twilight.

The main thing being it makes me feel good reading this because of the similarities, even if this was cancelled I enjoyed this little delve into the darkness of nightmares.
-Reader Out-

4302776 you should publish it, it's always worth getting an opinion on

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