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"Be good to yourself, because nobody else has the power to make you happy."

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It's the weekend after the Crusaders have received their Cutie Marks, and things have changed forever. Except... why is Diamond Tiara still being so cruel? Even WORSE than the way she was before. They thought she'd reformed...

The answer to that question may surprise you. Or it won't. You visionary genius, you.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

That's rather...unusual. and poor silver, she needs a hug.

Actually, i always wondered what made her follow diamond.

And i Actually had in mind to write diamond as bully myself, you got any advise, if its okay to ask?

Twist didn’t reply in the form of words to Diamond’s claims (to be fair, it seemed like an age ago since the red-maned candymaker had even spoken) but she did nod hesitantly, which seemed good enough for a somewhat amazed Cheerilee.

Nice use of a meta-joke.

“Apple Bloom. I’m surprised at you!!” The teacher scolded the flabbergasted filly, her voice a mixture of shock and disappointment. “Just because Diamond Tiara brings a beautiful apple to school with her for me, doesn’t mean you have to get jealous and ruin it! It’s not a competition to see who can bring me the nicest fruit. If you’d brought me one, I’d have appreciated it just as much. Instead, you decided to take a bite out of hers, and now I’m going to have to throw it away. You’ll be staying for detention after school, and I hope you realise now that actions have consequences.”

Jumping to conclusions in this manner, especially given Diamond's long history of giving Apple Bloom crap, feels very out of character for Cheerilee. I'm guessing this is going to be plot relevant later on.

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Well DT has been ‘dazzling’ her all day, and everyone can make a mistake. Or maybe the currant occupant of DT’s body knows how to push Cheerilee’s buttons… wait and see. :moustache:

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Just write how she is was in the show before COTLM, and you’ll be fine. Considering she had no depth or development until S5 it shouldn’t be too difficult. And what you have to remember is this fic isn’t DT as a bully, but you-know-who masquerading as her. Even DT at her worst wouldn’t be quite this malicious… :applejackunsure:

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Of course. I am just unsure what would be too far, even for her

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Agreed. Must say this is one of the most elaborate revenge plots I've seen in a fimfic for a while.

Cutie Mark Crusaders (also known as the ‘CMC’ by those allergic to syllables)

(applause)

unlike most of my stories which seem to carry on for an infinite amount of chapters, this one is going to consist of EXACTLY twelve

(even more applause)

What the heck is going on here man? What happened to you DT?

Ok, if I'm following this right Diamond Tiara got body swapped with... her mother I think? If so, that's pretty messed up.

And I didn’t think her mom could get any more evil.

Well now. Even though I'm fairly certain I know what's going on, I'm still intrigued to see how this turns out.

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Well, her mum is pretty 'messed up', so it would fit the profile... :derpyderp1:


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Indeed. :fluttershysad:


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Great to have you here man. :twistnerd:

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Thanks for the standing ovations (I think) :moustache:

Kinda wish you hadn't given away the shtick in the chapter title.

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Not everyone has seen it heard of the movie, in fact I think you’re the first to figure it out. Congrats! :twilightsmile:


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She’s just NUTS about… well, you know. :trixieshiftright:

Wonder what sort of leverage "Diamond" has over Twist? :twilightoops:

BANG! That was the sound of an oak tree directly making contact with the red-maned filly’s muzzle, just as she turned back to see how far behind her relentless pursuers were. This had the unpleasant effect of laying her out for the count, as well as cracking both lenses in her oversized glasses as they slid off onto the grass.

Ouch! Snitches DO get stitches after all.

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Glad you approve. :ajsmug:


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Well, you may just find out soon enough! :moustache: (Incidentally, do you use 'these' punctuation marks to emphasise a word, or "these"? I always thought "" was just used for speech...) :applejackunsure:


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I'm not qualified to answer that question. Maybe give Nurse Redheart a call? :pinkiesmile:

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