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Fascinating thus far, though if it's downhill from here, I dread seeing the details. Still looking forward to seeing them in all their nasty detail

(On a more prosaic note, something screwy's happened with the line breaks.)


"Autodefenestration" is best word.

First thing that comes to mind after reading the description XD

Well I wasn't expecting the scifi when I clicked on this. I'm interested to see where this goes. If Celestia is so bored she's causing property damage already in chapter 1 then she's in for one bumpy ride. I fear "going downhill" is something that takes on a whole new meaning in a society with space travel.

I can only hear "Skydiving- out of the window! How positively perilous!" in my head.

Very interesting take on the Retired Celestia idea. I wonder what Starswirl's Gift is. If I had to guess right now, I would think it's some kind of un-immortal device.

Also, something is off with the formatting. There are line breaks where there shouldn't be, mostly.

war banners[...]

Missing capital.

I held up a hoof and took a few deep breaths. With a roaring neigh, I reared on my hind legs and charged, pumping my wings for extra speed.

Sometimes, you just have to let it all out with a good WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIINNNEEEEHHHHHH!!!

She didn’t miss the ground, though, so she hasn’t learned to fly quite yet. The trick is to think of something else, while not thinking of thinking of something else.

Better luck next time, Not-Princess Horse!

>600kg Celestia
Yay, horse-sized Not-Princess Princess Horse!

(guess that's why they call it window pane)

Are you sure it is drama? I got a good laugh from this

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