The Talk in the Café

Cheerilee and her new acquaintance, Starlight Glimmer, decide to talk about themselves in the café when they run into each other on a nice day.

Written for the May Pairings Contest 2023

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Reba_McIntosh

Reba_McIntosh #1 · May 3rd, 2023 · 3 · ·

Aww, I liked this a lot. Their interaction was very sweet!

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #2 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Thanks! I had a fun time writing their interactions. Glad to see it worked out

ScarredVirtue

ScarredVirtue #3 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

Starlight and Cheerilee are a pairing I'd never have thought about.

Very sweet!

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #4 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Honestly, me either. But I saw the banner for the contest's group and I thought that writing about those two would be fun to do, and it was. Thanks!

AgentKorpsman

AgentKorpsman #5 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

"That'll be twelve bits." The merchant said with a smile.

“What cha buying stranger”

By the way is there a part two to this?

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #6 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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I might make one

AgentKorpsman

AgentKorpsman #7 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Maybe?

Wait are you not looking forward to make a sequel or something. I mean you could just add another chapter to this story?

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #8 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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I was not really thinking about making a sequel. But then I thought more about the pairing and I decided that it would be nice to make another story out of it and have their relationship develop further.

I mean you could just add another chapter to this story?

Nah I'll just make it seperate

Aklinstar

Aklinstar #9 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

That was a very cute exchange; a lovely pair I'd like to see more of. Cheerilee should really invest in a small cart to tow around when buying so much, like a... lilac one.

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #10 · May 3rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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That was a very cute exchange; a lovely pair I'd like to see more of.

I'm definitely thinking about writing a sequel to this. There's gonna be more to this pair soon!

Cheerilee should really invest in a small cart to tow around when buying so much, like a... lilac one.

Very interesting hehe

overdue

overdue #11 · May 4th, 2023 · 2 · ·

i'm sure this is a very good story but the whole time I couldn't stop thinking about what it would feel like to carry a heavy bag in my teeth until they hurt

Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #12 · May 4th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Have a thumbs up for spelling “Earl Grey” properly.

A short, sweet slice-of-life

Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #13 · May 4th, 2023 · · ·

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I'd imagine it would be painful. I don't know how Earth ponies do it.

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I thought it was always easy to spell Earl Grey haha. Thanks!

AgentKorpsman

AgentKorpsman #14 · May 4th, 2023 · 2 · ·

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Fake enough. Since the ending may have hinted at it. But some would assume she made a new friend.

Rego

Rego #15 · May 15th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Kind of the same sentiments here with both teeth and lilac. It's the tyrrany of repeating words in English. I got a little distracted by a trap of repeating words. Still, nice to see another Cheerilee in this contest.

KarmaSentinal