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Big Mac and Cheerilee decide that three little fillies should know what being put under a love potion is really like, and infect Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo with a love potion, with surprising results.

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your fanfic was very interesting

Seems kind of lazy to use a screencap for the cover pic, don't you think?

i like the idea very creative

Probably should've put more effort in that cover image.

Comment posted by glory deleted Mar 17th, 2018

a great start for a first story on the site. the pacing is a little off but otherwise its great.

Cutie and nice short story. Keep working and waiting for something new form you :)

Well, that's a thing. In all seriousness though a nice little fic.

Could you make a sequel to this? I really want to see what happen when the CMC get home:pinkiehappy:

We still blame Twilight Sparkle!!!!!

In a sequel, the CMC saw Spike and the love chase begins.

Haven't the C.M.C.s been punished enough? If not, why don't they have them write an open letter to the Princess about what they have done and read them in front of the entire class?

As for that love potion, Twilight better get rid of it before Spike gets a hold of it and gets tempted to use it on Rarity.

Comment posted by Seaside Skies deleted Mar 19th, 2018

Here's some more shipfics either entirely about or containing CMC polyamory:

Steel Resolve's Green (The CMC are in the background, but they're still cute.)

Girls of Canterlot High's Never Be Alone

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Omg. Thank you so much!

Two wrongs don't make a right. Especially for such petty reasons.
That really was a horrible story.

I didn't read this yet, due to time reasons, but there's a certain assumption in the Author's Notes that I can happily disprove:

No, you're not.^^ And you're not the only one writing about it.
That fic up there is one of the most beautiful ponyfics I've ever read and will probably always be my favourite shipfic.^^
It's rare to see a fic that has them being in a threesome relationship, but it's always very delightful.^^

I get that Big Mac was pretty steamed at Apple Bloom and the CMC for putting him and Cheerilee under a love potion, but that was just a low blow on his part. It was even lower when he involved Cheerily into this, since for one, she was a victim too, despite the CMC's good intentions, and two, because she didn't want to get back at them in the first place:twilightangry2:! You'd think after another five whole seasons, that he would've been over it by now:facehoof:. Alas, it seems that some ponies just can't let go of a grudge, especially if their an Apple...:ajsleepy:. Even so, what Big Mac and Cheerilee did wasn't any better, it was even worse, especially since they were still fillies! Did they not think of the possible side effect that their little stunt would have on the girls?! Did they consider what that potion may do their mental and emotional health?! Did they even, for one single moment, stop to think about how this could alter the girls future and relatiohsip together as friends:flutterrage:?!

I really hope those two fess up to what they did to Applejack, Granny Smith, and Rarity soon, because they're gonna suspect something is up eventually, and it would be best to come clean now and face the music:applejackunsure:. That and also give a nice good apology to the CMC for trying back at them the way they did:ajbemused:.

Huh, I rarely see CMC ships. Which is too bad 'cuz it's one of my favorites.

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