When the Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to clean the Apple house, they discover the diary of Applebloom’s beloved brother, and find out he has a crush on a mysterious special somepony. Will they know who it is? Will they help Big Macintosh with his love life, or will they create chaos just like they did on Hearts and Hooves Day?
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Wow, this could definitely use some proofreading.
"Where are the murders?!"
Wow, Big Mac takes being a Southerner seriously; he even writes with an accent!
Let's see where this leads.
Your grammar is not that bad, Just needs a spit shine. Other than that, You've completely caught my interest in this story. I honestly can not hold my excitement for this story. :)
Are you going too update more today?
2852912 Big Macintosh is not writing in 'Southern' I presume that Big Mac writes normal. But it's the way they pronounce there words, For example. People who have a southern accent pronounced the word 'isn't' to 'ain't'
Plus, Apple bloom was reading his diary OUT LOUD. So of course she is going to pronounce words southernly
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That would be true if the diary entries were formatted as dialogue, i.e.
But they're not; instead, they're formatted as italicized text blocks, indicating a direct quotation from the printed (written) pages, so they should not have the character's accents phonetically written out.
Plus, the second diary excerpt is being read by Scootaloo, and she would not be reading it with a southern accent.
2854783 Thank you very much!
And by answering your question...I'll have next chapter ready by tomorrow! I'll try my best to have it ready before that 
Interesting....go on.
2854859 Wow! My goodness! You are correct.
Hmm a few grammar errors but nothing that was to bad. Although i must say that i like the notion of this story so i will keep an eye on it.
2854808 Oh i don't know i have met a few people who legitimately wrote in a Southern accent... it was infuriating.
2856491 My sincerest apologizes, I myself was born and raised in the south. When I wrote that, it was very early in the morning. (I was quite of my rocker) I never intended to offend and one.
On the other hoof, interesting premise, I'm a
writer my self, so do proceed. 
Well have fun in the lands of Disney and the land of cheap hoes
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Thank you! I'll try my best 
lol that made me laugh
I think in the end it is gonna to be trixie
By the descriptions in his diary I think it's Cheerlie
Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
I thought this was a CheeriMac fic.
Still.
FlashLight. Me Gusta.
Also interesting twist.
I loved this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
He said she had books. IT MUST BE TWILIGHT!
I think it's going to be Cheerilie!!,
I can't wait for the next chapter, so far this is one of my favorites!!!!
Or is it?!?!!?
Can't be Pinkie on account of she their fourth cousin twice removed.
Need more... What happens next?